All At Once - Comments

That was such a cute chapter:) Can't wait for the next one!

Just do it Danny! The suspense is killing me! Kiss her! Or Sara could just jump him. I'd be okay with that too, this being the modern era & everything! (I never in a million years thought I would ever be itching for some naked Briere. You are good, Juliet!)

Omg I love this so much!!
I love that all the boys are trying to get them together!
And sara's inert monologue trying to get Danny to ask her out is the best!
Can not wait to see who makes the first move!

I love the scheming kids & Claude going right along with them. Perfect. I want Danny to ask her out, & I'm sure it's going to happen, but I can definitely see the hesitation on both sides. Dating a parent is risky for a teacher, but dating a parent who is semi-famous makes it even more so. I can also see why Danny would be hesitant, considering his messy divorce, coupled with the fact he doesn't think Sara is interested. I'm just waiting for him to think she's into Claude next. Anyway, I hope you update soon. I'm sure the laser tag "date" will be fun.

Great update! Danny is adorable. I like how both Danny and Sara think that the other doesn't like them the same way. Can't wait for the next chapter.

This story is seriously perfect. I love how both Danny and Sara think that the other wouldn't want anything to do with them. It makes for such likable characters, as weird as that sounds. Hopefully you update soon because I can't wait for the next chapter!

Awesome! I hope you write a sex scene or two or three

UGGGHHHH This is so heart-meltingly cuuuute! I love this. Danny is so adorable! He deserves someone as sweet and caring as Sara!

Shocking news, in love with another one of your stories! I seriously get so excited when I see you updated. I can't wait to see how the game, laser tag, and Claude becoming the fourth child pushing the relationship of Danny and Sara goes. :) I am waiting for the next update.

seriously. this is the cutest story ever.

oh no... I'm starting to fall in love with the flyers! as a Blackhawks fan I should really hate them but you're making that impossible!! I love the boys' devious plan and cannot wait for them to go laser tagging. Your updates are my drug.. I need MORE

ughhh every time I comment on your stories I'm just more and more in love with them. My favorite things from this chapter: that Danny's fantasy is a woman helping to raise his kids; that Hartsy, G, and Couturier showed up; how un-stealthy G was with Sara. the list goes on... I also like that Sara and Danny are so flustered and excited by one another but they think they're the only ones. You write every type of character so well! Nora and Claude were the complete opposite - they acted like they wanted each other from the beginning. This is different from that, yet it's still so fun to read! Can't wait for more! :)

This story is so great!

I cant believe I am saying this but I am totally in love with Team Briere - and throw in the hunky ging as well! There is such a sweetness about these 3 boys conspiring to find someone to make their father happy. For kids that have been through a bitter divorce, it is certainly refreshing to see they still believe in love - although they may not get it yet!!

Now that Danny gets that Sara wasnt taking any chances that she woulnt see them all again by giving Cameron the paintballing gift certificate, maybe he will man up after the game and ask her out!

This is a great story; keep on writing it please!

Yes please update soon! I'm obsessed with this and I only love CLAUDE!

It's so amazing! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i'm with a lot of people on this...I AM FALLING FOR SOME FLYERS PLAYERS...
LOVE LOVE LOVE this story and just about all of the other ones too!! :)

I've only become a Flyers fan recently and that's a lot coming from a pretty hardcore Pens fan! Bitches like that can stuff it. People can root for whatever goddamn team they want to. I absolutely LOVE every one of your stories, no matter the team! I'm really excited to see where this one goes....It would be really hard to fall in love with the parent of your student, but love is love, right? So who cares?!? Great chapter!

I'm absolutely loving this one. I can't wait to read more and see how everything unfolds between the two. because they're toeing around the idea of dating but they are diving straight in for it. I love it, glad you went to the dark side to write this.