All At Once - Comments

Love this! You're actually making me like him and I'm a die-hard Pens fan! Keep up the good work!

This is awesome. I love this story and I'm not even a flyers fan. Lol

I absolutely love your writing style! I actually kind of like that the flyer's aren't your team, all too often fans can go a little overboard on somethings. But you're building this story just right. Seriously cannot wait to read more!

As a Flyers fan, I feel the need to apologize for the other member of this fanbase who felt the need to express her highly unnecessary opinion. (No wonder we get such a bad rap?) Anyway, this story is fantastic and even though I've never met Danny I feel like you capture his personality perfectly, as well as the kind of woman he'd be interested in with Sara. It's hard to find such well-written Flyer stories on this site so I'm really ecstatic you're on your second!

Love this story already!! All your stories are great and I can't wait to read more :) Update soon please...Danny is so precious in this story so far!

I'm not a Flyers fan. I'm even less of a Briere fan. But you are so good I'm already obsessed with this story! Ignore the haters. I have one girl who constantly reports my work as plagerism because she writes about the same hockey players (even though the storylines aren't even close to the same).
Just ignore that crap. You do all the players & teams literary justice even if you aren't a fan. And you turn people into fans - I adore Claude Giroux now because of Forget To Remember. I'll end up adoring Briere too I'm sure!
Can't wait for more!

Cute chapter!

omg i love that the boys are trying to get them together!
and i agree with everyone else! why would someone say that to you! I'm a Blackhawks fan but i love reading other player fics that are not on the hawks roster.... and besides you're and amazing writer and i bet i would read anything you write.

I think I dies from adorableness! RIP Amanda! Holy crap you are killing me!
Anyway...loved it and can't wait for more!
Amanda :)

Don't let that person tell you that you can't write this story, because you're very capable. I'm captivated and can't wait to read more.

I'm glad you're not stopping because this story just keeps getting better! I love how his sons are trying to get them together...so cute. Hopefully you update again really soon!

I'm definitely not a Flyers fan but so freaking what! People are crazy! Plus, Briere has played for others teams, for my team.

Anyway, this story is great and it's only just begun! I can't wait to watch it all develop. Great job, as always! :)

What the hell? Why would someone say something like that? I think it's fantastic when authors write outside their comfort zone & I'm certainly glad you are doing so with this story. Love the chemistry between Danny & Sara & I can't wait to see the sparks fly when they finally do kiss.

LOVE LOVE LOVE! I'm a Bruins fan and I'm totally into your Flyers stories. If he's cute and nice off the ice, I don't care what team he plays for. :) I want Sara to eventually meet Nora! And I loved the bit where the boys were scheming how to get their father with Sara. Can't wait for more!

Well you are definitely starting to convert me. I am definitely NOT a Flyers fan, but with your Giroux story and now this one - you are doing the impossible.

But who could resist a guy with 3 cute kids like this... certainly not Sara! Although it does bring to light the difficulties of dating a pro hockey player who is a single dad of 3 boys - not to mention a "less than cooperative" ex-wife, who I am sure will make some sort of appearance along the way.

Keep up the great work!!!

I'm. In. Love.
:)

Can't wait for more! the kids are so cute

You are a fabulous writer! I can never get enough of your stories. The The Little Mermaid song Kiss the Girl went through my head all through this chapter. I can't wait for what's next!

Oh my gosh Danny sleep with her!

This was amazing yet again!! Just one little inaccuracy - No way Giroux gets stopped in the shootout. I totally get you needed it that way though :) Also that Flyers fan must be one of those nasty Philly fans we are always hearing about.