She'd Be a Hurricane - Comments

This is for comment swap (: I absolutely love this story. I'm not much on Fan Fiction but this one is so well written. I'll be subbing for sure! I don't know what else to say. I really like the way you describe the setting. You are just a good writere (:

From comment swap. This story is very good. It's well written and the plot is artistic. You are very descriptive in the way that you write. Your characters are very creative and well developed. The only problem I have is visualizing the story, but other than that it is wonderful. I love how your layout looks and how it all matches perfectly. I don't like Twilight, but this fanfiction is different and I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work and keep the updates coming. :)

I really love the story. Its so good. I love the plot and the descriptiveness. The characters are developed very well along with the scenes. I can visualize everything, and oh my. Dont even get me started on your layout! Its absolutely perfect i loove the picture and you matched all the olors and ahhh its perfect c: great story, keep writing babe xx

All right, so to start off you layout is magnificent. I love everything about it. I love the red and how it matched the banner, and the floral pattern is really beautiful, so good job on that. I really like the story itself too, I'm only a few chapters in so far and it is a lot more original than many of the Twilight fics on here. The only complaint I have is that your summary is too long for my liking, but everything else is great. :)

Okay, first, let me just say, I ADORE YOUR LAYOUT. With a burning passion. It's beautiful. I love the grain in the photo and the floral print in the background and the deep read and the white and just *passes out*

*clears throat* Anywho. Your plot is brilliant and I love the way you write. Like many people, I love to hate Twilight, but with this, I almost forgot it was a Twilight fanfic!

Good job! <3

This is seriously awesome! Most Twilight fan fictions are about Bella and Edward but I live how you brought in someone completely new with her own story and added it. I saw no problems with it and I absolutely can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work:)

Comment swap sent me here;;
I couldn't be happier that I was sent here. I really like the layout, very nice. The summary quickly pulled me in, and you use such great detail, which I love. The characters are well portrayed. All-in-all, I loved this. Keep up the good work. :)

I reallly like your layout. No change it!!!!

I really like this keep it going:D

Woah, I feel really sorry for Aubrey. She obviously has a really hard life. What with Malcom doing dirty things with her, to having to leave Boston. Just all of it.
So, I finally realized this was a Twilight fanfiction at the third chapter I think it was, haha. I really like this, though, even though I'm not a fan of Twilight.
I don't know if I accidently skipped/ read over it, but what happened to Mark?
Jared seems really sweet. It's good that he takes Aubrey's pain away, even if just for a second.
All-in-all, I really liked this.