I'm Not Strong Enough to Stay Away - Comments

  • used to know.

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    Comment Swap!
    I definitely giggled to myself when i saw "the Winchesters" in your summary. Sadly, I'm not part of the Supernatural fandom but a lot of my friends are so SN is always on my dash on tumblr hahaha. I'm pretty familiar with the characters (thanks to tumblr) and I loved the way you wrote them out. I like a story with a good bit of dialogue, this story definitely had some really good dialogue. Everything flowed really nicely. It sort of read like a script to a play which I guess makes sense since SN is a tv show haha.

    Overall, it was a wonderful story and you're very talented :) Keep writing!
    December 13th, 2013 at 07:01am
  • DuckyDuck

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    Okay, this is a comment swap! I really like this story. I usually do not read these types of stories because they don't really interest me. I am not into the demons type of things. However your story compelled me to read it, so I gave your story a try. I never really got into the show but I really like this. It is really good. I may just start watching the show, well that is if it relates to the show. Your story may have just gotten me hooked on it. Now I have to go and read the sequel. I read it not seeing there was a sequel and I almost didn't want to read it. But then I saw that there is in fact a sequel and that made me happy. I am also going to read some of your other stuff, I like your writing style. Keep up the good work. I’m now a dedicated reader to all of your stories. So excited to read the sequel to this and read your other works. Hopefully your writing can make me a fan of Supernatural. Hopefully I can actually get hooked on the show this time(: Thanks for writing(:
    November 12th, 2012 at 11:37pm
  • Akuma-May

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    "as if he were the Elixir of Life and she was Voldemort" Favourite line right there. Fuck i fucking love this! The constant harry potter references just make it better... you are an AMAZING writer fuck.. i just... Have i said I love you?
    August 16th, 2012 at 12:43am
  • Ageless.Daughters

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    The last line killed me! I'm so sad that it's over but hmm your author's note hints that it may not be...a sequel perhaps? Fantastic work :)
    August 1st, 2012 at 06:49am
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    I teared up again! Geez woman you're gonna kill me here. :) Also I seriously hope you end up making a sequel for this. . . Or I'll hex you. (;
    July 25th, 2012 at 08:37am
  • Eliot Spencer

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    Ugh! No more seriously??????? :/. It was awesome though!
    July 23rd, 2012 at 06:17pm
  • squidward tentacles.

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    That actually made me cry a little bit.
    July 23rd, 2012 at 10:04am
  • Ageless.Daughters

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    Oh my gosh I'm so late on reading this I'm sorry! But ah this chapter attacked me with feelings it was amazing! I can't wait for the next one argh!
    July 15th, 2012 at 06:09am
  • nyelabee1

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    every chapter is blank! not sure what is going on but cant read the new chapter update! AHHH!!
    July 10th, 2012 at 11:51pm
  • Eliot Spencer

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    Oh my frigging Lord! This makes me want to watch Season 5 over again. So hitting up netflix again. Facepalm I can't believe there is only one more chapter left!
    July 10th, 2012 at 05:22pm
  • Ageless.Daughters

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    Oh this killed me! UGH the ending of it my goodness...this chapter has too many feels. Can't handle them all.
    July 2nd, 2012 at 06:03am
  • Eliot Spencer

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    Okay. Crying. Again. Lol. <3ed it! Hope you feel better soon! And there's more then two more chapters...right???
    June 30th, 2012 at 08:19am
  • Eliot Spencer

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    Oh wow! You really did update huh? Lol. I loved it! Dean's having a baby! ROFL. <3.
    June 12th, 2012 at 08:01pm
  • Eliot Spencer

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    Oh wow! You really did update huh? Lol. I loved it! Dean's having a baby! ROFL. <3.
    June 12th, 2012 at 08:01pm
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    Comment trade: This isn't my usual type of story, but it was pretty cool! The summary never specifies what the fanfic is of, I don't think? So that was kind of confusing; I had no idea what I was about to read, but gathered that it was fanfic. I could be wrong, but if I'm not, maybe specify it's a Supernatural fanfic in the beginning? That said, I've never watched the show; I've only heard of it a lot. But I liked the first chapter a lot. You sometimes state the obvious (for instance, if you say someone exclaimed something, you don't really need to say they did so excitedly; it's implied), but aside from that it was pretty good! Didn't see too many grammar or syntax errors, which are the only things that really bother me. Keep it up! It looks like you definitely have some fans. :)
    June 12th, 2012 at 04:14pm
  • S a m .

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    Yay update <3 It was worth staying up for, i promise :) I seriously love her powers, are you going to elaborate more on them, or why she can dream through Ella's eyes? cause that would be an epic thing if you make it seem epic, ya know? Well, Imma head to bed, update soon! <3
    June 12th, 2012 at 07:28am
  • S a m .

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    I did come through comment swap, but I love this. I just spent like, 2 hours reading this whole thing. Supernatural is kinda my obsession, or it used to be. I love Dean <3. I must say I enjoy this story very much. Thank you, from the bottom of my heart, for writing it.
    June 12th, 2012 at 12:42am
  • Ageless.Daughters

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    Argh I've been so behind on this but I'm caught back up and love it! Keep going can't wait!
    June 12th, 2012 at 12:06am
  • ofhorizons

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    I have come via comment swap. :)

    This is really well written, especially when I can read it, not know what Supernatural consists of and still get what you're writing about. :) It's really well written, keep it up! :)
    June 11th, 2012 at 04:41am
  • Evil.Red.Head

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    Oh awesome! Supernatural is one of my favorite shows, I like the way it’s heading and how it started out! Everything is tying into place, I’ll definitely be keeping up with the rest of the updates; it’s very interesting and I like how it’s going!
    June 11th, 2012 at 02:59am