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  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    What a good daddy! I'm so glad she's getting to take her classes. :-) And it's going to be hilarious when he helps with the recital, because he's GOING to give in. lol.
    July 31st, 2012 at 07:39am
  • avenging angel

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    Ok if last chapter was kinda heartbreaking then this one was pretty funny! Can't believe he went all though that for his little girl! It's. Cute!! Great update!!:) and as for a little friend for Audrey hmmm maybe a girl named Lily who's just eight and always seems to be hyper that she can never stop talking and has the really pretty brunette curls and light hazel eyes...:) just suggesting lol
    July 31st, 2012 at 07:28am
  • Through-the-Night

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    That's so sad, but Brian kind of deserved it. I think this will be what really shapes him up as a father. I can't wait to see all the other guys kick his ass over this.
    July 30th, 2012 at 11:35pm
  • avenging angel

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    I can see how this was heartbreaking and yeah it kinda was!! Poor Audrey!! Go Val for yelling at Brian!!! That dumbhead! Can't wait to see what the guys say about this! If you update this later tonight your freaking awesome!!!!great update!!:)
    July 30th, 2012 at 10:54pm
  • xShadows

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    Just finished reading the first chapter and it sounds extremely familiar... The Game Plan? lol
    July 30th, 2012 at 10:43pm
  • Madam Shadows;

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    I fucking love Val!! Brian needs to get his shit together! I love this! :)
    July 30th, 2012 at 10:05pm
  • pekigirl

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    oh my god!! Val, you fucking rock ahah Brian deserved this lecture, and I hope he learns something with this! Loved the chapter!!
    July 30th, 2012 at 09:37pm
  • FictionisTrue12

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    Brian is such a dumbass i mean who leaves their kid at the mall??!! Love it anyway cant wait for the next update :):):):):)
    July 30th, 2012 at 09:22pm
  • MrsChristX

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    cant believe brian left his daughter. Love this story. val been angry is funny. cant wait for next update Mr. Green
    July 30th, 2012 at 09:09pm
  • Skarsgard

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    I was tempted to let you leave it but I figure I shouldn't. "Hoe dare you Yeah.

    I loved this. Val angry is awesome. I'd die laughing if I saw her giving Brian hell like that. Hope you get 10 comments!
    July 30th, 2012 at 09:07pm
  • pekigirl

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    omfg how could he forget about Audrey??!! O.O jesus christ.. loved the chapter though.. and I didn't like the fact that brian called Audrey his niece =( but well.. I'm sure it'll be explained soon x)
    July 30th, 2012 at 10:13am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    God...I know you don't need to read this statement again, but Brian is a fucking idiot!!!!!!!!!!

    Update NOW! lol.
    July 30th, 2012 at 06:48am
  • avenging angel

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    Women you seriously have to update this after ending it like that!!!! Brian is a retard!!! How could he forgot about her?!??! I hope it bites him in the ass and he's in trouble for it! Not only by Val biting his head off but with the law for leaving his daughter like that!!!! Please update soon!!!!!:)
    July 30th, 2012 at 05:20am
  • Skarsgard

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    Brian is an idiot. How the hell did he forget her?! Seriously I want to smack him.

    Can't wait for the next update!
    July 30th, 2012 at 05:17am
  • kierstlovesyou

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    wow brian. loved it <333
    July 30th, 2012 at 04:58am
  • Madam Shadows;

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    Oh my god! Brian, you idiot! You left her at the Mall.. >.< Hope to read more soon! <3
    July 30th, 2012 at 04:51am
  • My Story

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    update soon! i love it!
    July 30th, 2012 at 04:25am
  • Marissa.Motionless

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    *you
    July 30th, 2012 at 03:53am
  • Marissa.Motionless

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    Brian to dumbass! That cop's gonna hand his ass to him when he gets Audery back! I'm glad no pedo got to her, I can't imangine how Brian's gonna feel! I can't wait for the next update!
    July 30th, 2012 at 03:52am
  • hachie

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    Aubrey is just so adorable that you can't hate her unless you don't have a heart! I think Michelle won't really like having Aubrey around because she came from one of Brian's serious girlfriend back in high school, a girl that he was completely bonkers for! I can't wait for the next update!
    July 19th, 2012 at 07:48am