Messy Ending - Comments

Can't wait for more!

i absolutely LOVE this stor you have no idea!! :D

My best friend is like, a freak for Asking Alexandria. Actually, a lot of people I know are. And they aren't a bad band. I'm just not that into them. That said, I know absolutely nothing-- zero. Ziltch. Nada. . . about the members of Asking Alexandria. So a few things were a bit confusing to me and I thought the concept was a bit cliche. I dont mean to be rude so please don't take offense, the writing was well done. And I applaud you for that. I thought the layout was kinda ugly though hah. Its a good story. Just not for me. :] great job though! keep writing! xox

goddamn. my comment wasn't long enough, sorry. I really like this story. I came across it via comment swap, and I'm glad I did. This story is well written and has great description. I love the use of vocabulary, I rarely find stories like that. You're a great writer, keep it up. I'll be waiting for another update c:

I really like this story, I love the description you use. I read it pretty quickly, it's very well written. I like the vocabulary you use c: please update soon :)

I like how the story is detailed, yet it's not complicated, and it still manages to seem effortless to read. It's the perfect combination. Please update soon!

The layout is nice and simple, I like it that way. The story was very well written, full of detail and description. The summary pulled me in right away, curious about the rest of the story, which did not disappoint. The story flows very nicely and the chapters are good lengths. Overall, it's an awesome story! Keep up the great work!

love this story please update soon :D

Comment swap brought me here, and I'm pleased that it gave me a story with a writer who is good at writing! You do a good job at having dialogue without making it just talking because you add detail and actions! Keep up the good work !

I like how the characters are so different. But at the same time i feel as if the characters don't always stick to the way they are they kind of jump. I feel when Ben was having sex with his girlfriend and thought of Dai the whole time that was more his kind of personality that you portrayed in the beginning. But overall i like this and i'm interested in seeing how it turns out.

Update soon!! :)

I listen to some Asking Alexandra, I've been to a concert, and If I may say so without being struck by lighting the badass-ness scale just fell to pieces because of this story. The characters are interesting, you can hear such a clear voice your descriptions are excellent, and your dialogue is witty, hilarious, and real. I honestly can't wait for an update, I hope it comes soon!!! :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

I honestly don't know much about Asking Alexandria and never listened to them, but this story is very well written. Keep up the good work, because it's really good so far! Definitely recommended. :)

I also meant to say that I just listened to the song that is your title credit and I like it! :)

I honestly don't know much about Asking Alexandria and never listened to them, but this story is very well written. Keep up the good work, because it's really good so far! Definitely recommended. :)

i cant wait for the next chapter :)

This so far is one of the best AA fanfics ive ever read! and ive read over 100!

Wow. I have never read an Asking Alexandria fic before, but I think this story will be the first of many for me.
Despite the whole sleeping with the band dude cliche, I'm really drawn to how you write for some reason. You have real talent, so keep it up my friend c:

-Jess xx

I'm not a fan of band fictions at all. But I loved the entrance of your first chapter. The fact that while this girl is having sex with this Ben character, she is also defending herself by stating that she didn't always sleep with guys.

One thing that I don't like is the fact that this is not original. It's a replica of every other band fiction I have read, or something of that sort. Guy meets girl/girl meets guy. Once in a lifetime thing. One night stand. Girl leaves guy. Guy and girl meet somehow again.

Hope you change it up. I'd be disappointed if you didn't 

In the first chapter you got right into the story, which was interesting. But there was enough in the summary for that readers wouldn't be lost and wonder what the heck was going on. And I can't remember the last time I read a story that separates points of view between multiple characters in a single chapter. that really brings me back to my Quizilla days :D I remember reading somewhere on Mibba that its bad practice to separate point of view as you did but I honestly never minded.

Another thing I noticed was how at the end of a few chapters you even post links to what your main character is wearing, and I find that amazing how devoted to this story you are.

I like this, and how you tell the story from the characters point of view, without re-telling the story (if that makes sense). I also don't read many Ben stories so this is cool for me. One thing that disappointed me was the first chapter seemed really rushed and you totally skipped over any sex which is kind of a key point to this story, but anyway. I wanna see where you take this and see how their first meeting will go.