Letters - Comments

Felt like the beginning was kind of bumpy and just a bit confusing. Possible would help if chapters were labeled with character in pov. Thought the story was very well written and that the flow got better as the story moves on. Like that it was almost a surprise fan fiction with Ronnie radke, and that it wasn't centered around his fame but you slowly slipped in that he was writing music to playing a show. Wish to have more story about willow and her cat or more descriptive words about what she looks like. Look forward to an update.

I have to admit I don't read much band fan-fics but I'm glad comment swap chose this one for me to read! I thought the fact that Willow named her cat Mr. Poo-Poo was hilarious. I started cracking up, literally. I like the idea of writing someone a letter because you don't really see people write letters much anymore. Ronnie seems funny and quite amicable; I've listened to Falling in Reverse before and they have an awesome album. I'm a little sad the story is on hiatus but I'm excited for when you start writing again, and I'm eager to learn more about these two characters. It really is a well written story.

So I started reading this as a comment swap thingy mabob, but now I'm totally hooked! I'm not sure who Ronnie Radke is but he seems really bored with his current situation and I love how you use that to show how playful he actually is! Btw I LOVE the name willow!!! :) can't wait for more updated! Look forward 6o seeing how they will meet!! I love that you used the letters to descrube her appearance, it's a very different character introducton method and I love it!!!! Keep writing!

WOW I love how it starts off as two people who barely know each other and then escalates to two friends who are possibly starting to fall in love. I loved the simplicity of it. I want to know what happens next! This was a very interesting story, that's what I love about this site how there is a whole variety of things! And this was certainly very different. Good job on the writing! Keep writing more chapters.

I LOVEE IT

This story has such a refreshing storyline, it's nice to read something laid out so perfectly :D
Update? Please?

Just saw your new Ronnie story and got myself caught up. I am really liking this so far. It's very cute and different. I like the whole strangers becoming pen pals and getting to know eachother thing. :) I can't wait for more!

Just received this story from comment swap! First of all, I love Ronnie Radke, and so far I’m incredibly intrigued on this. It’s not the regular fan fiction where all that happens is a girl meets her favorite star at a concert and they eventually fall in love despite their age. So I honestly do appreciate the originality of this. Secondly, you’ve done exceptional in the way that you’ve laid the story out; it has kept me on my toes every chapter. The letters especially, intrigue me, and I find myself quickly reading through so I can reach their letters. It actually sort of makes me wish that I had a pen pal that I could write to! Also, I like that you didn’t make Ronnie someone to brag about how he’s a famous and successful front man. I’m just glad that you actually made him just subtly hint at what he does for a living. Oh, and I laughed out loud at the Sasquatch part, it was hilarious! :D Anyway, seriously enjoyed this! I subscribed, so please update soon!

The layout looks beautiful, you story is truly amazing. I love how each chapter changes from Willow's to Ronnie's point of view, that was brilliant. The way this story started was really cute and I love that they barely know each other yet they're still writing back and forth to each other. Also, just the story it's self is truly beautiful. Keep up the amazing work, and promise to update soon! <3

The new layout is to pretteh, Katie, and it's so much more dramatic than the last one, and that is totally what a Ronnie story needs seeing as that man is nothing but dramatic. xD Oh lord. I love Willow. I love her letters. She sounds so adorable, and I love how she wrote an entire paragraph, tried to explain it, and then was just like, "Screw it. Ignore that." She's funny, man, probably the funniest character you've ever made. And I love how Ronnie is acting all mushy inside over her because it's totally not like him, and I love it. And I love that you wrote Jacky's accent because, yes, I am still a total sucker for Jacky Vincent and his adorable British-ness. I think we had a whole discussion about that on IM one night, but hell, I can't remember. 8D I'm sitting here reading this at seven in the morning, giggling like a moron at my grandparent's kitchen table, and they're just looking at me and demanding to know what I'm reading, but I'll never tell. ;) But, damn it, I wanted to know what Anthony was going to say if he was going to say anything at all. Damn adorable British Jacky. *snaps fingers* Can't wait for the next chapter, girly. This is awesome.

This was a fantastic update! I love the new look!

Can you say "best chapter ever"?

I absolutely adored this, dude xD LIKE SERIOUSLY GUISE. BUT NO, REALLY. willow's letter - especially her ramblings - were ridiculously cute. like, seriously? you can definitely tell by her syntax and diction that she's a kindiegawten teacher. one for the books, i'd say x) i love the tattoo o_o i also loved her taste in music - perfect? i think so. i love that ronnie is sitting there, just thinking all these thoughts to himself and having this mental warfare going on between the logical, rational, 28-year old-man Ronald Joseph, who doesn't get crushes and is too manly for fruit punch, and the sweet, loving, ronnie jo who is perfectly happy with having this insane affection for a girl he has never met that's been randomly sending him letters for..what, a couple months now?

lol.

xD

but anyway, i also rather enjoyed this:

I have become overly attached to these letters from this girl and it bugs me to know that I can't just let my brother read one without the threat of spazzing out all over him, bitch slapping him like a girl, and ripping the letter back. What have I become.

As you witnessed, this made me laugh like a hyena on crack. and that doesn't look right to me... hmm -.- but yes, that portion of that chapter just had me dyin' and i absolutely loved it xD

HES BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK

at least that was awesomer than "guess what? ... I'm back" ....-.-

LOVED THIS CHAPTER TO LITTLE TINY RIDICULOUS PIECES AND IF YOU DONT EFFING UPDATE THIS ISH I WILL COME TO YOU IN YOUR SLEEP AND...AND... HOG YOUR BED

O_O

ill do it, you know. O_O

ANYWAY

i love you

8D

UPDATE THIS DAMNIT

ily bestieFIRlifeeee <3333

Molz

Despite the fact that you do not like the new mibba layout maker *high fives* your layout still looks good. Your story is very well written and I can tell that your readers really enjoy it, jut by looking at some of their comments. I'm gonna recommend this one because it's good. :)

This is really interesting. I'm liking the story plot, especially that they send letters to each other. It's just really cute and I love Ronnie (even though I haven't really kept up with him lately). Anyway, this is very well written and I just love it a lot. Recommended and subscribed. :) Update soon.

Lo0ved the update!

you know I wish I could favorite comments on here, because if I could I'd favorite TeamTonyVincent's comment can Alexa please go die? I cracked up when I read that. I adore this story and am looking forward to your next update : ] this is a very well thought out story and very creative and again, I adore this story!!!!!

oooh my goodness i love this greatly! please please please for the love of GOD continue this story :) Willow is adorable and i want her cat xD I am so so so subscribing to you story :) keep up the amazing work! I can't WAIT to read the next chapter!!!!!

Chapter Six:

At this point in time, she needs to reply snarkily. With something like, "Bond. James Bond." It's no one's business what "his" name is. >.> But N'AWW, SHE LIKES RONNIE, SHE LIKES HIM A LOT, AND IT'S CUUUUUUUUUTE! 8D See what I meant about this story fucking with my ability to comment? But anyways... I still love it. And that they're having this cute little letter-writing. It's adorkable. <333 I can't wait to see what you come up with next, but no pressure. ;) We talked about that.

Chapter Five:

Can Alexa please go die? Somewhere quietly and out of the way? Because every time she's in a chapter, I can't start a comment with "N'aww" because my dislike of her ratchets up to hate every time I see her name. Annoying cunt... Anyhoo, I love this. Ronnie being all excited to read the letters was adorable. And hey, tattoo. 8D Ms. Kindergarten Teacher has some 'splainin' to do. xD

Chapter Four:

N'aww, I love cats. The only mistake that might be there is in the third to last chapter about her cat. It says "Is a very sweet and loving creature", but I'm not sure if you meant to type it that way. I do it a lot, but obviously, we are not the same people. Anyway, I like how Ronnie wants to know something about her, and how she's actually willing to write to him despite not knowing him very well. I also like that they're so very different. It makes an interesting contrast.