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  • starshine14

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    I really like this story and I can't wait to read more. I love the unique story line and the fact that it is different to other stories I have read and that anything could happen at this stage in the story, you could make it totally unpridicatable. It is also well written an I enjoyed Reading it and I'm looking forward to Reading more. I can't wait to see what happens next.
    June 9th, 2012 at 11:10am
  • HookedOnVengeance.

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    This is so interesting! I've never really known much about Ronnie Radke because of his y'know - past shenanigans. For some reason though, in this story I can picture exactly what he's like and I love to be able to do that!

    The plot sounds like it's going to be a good one and I'm already smiling at the fact Willow & Ronnie are writing back and forth, it's sweet :)

    Keep up the good work, I'll look forward to seeing how this progresses!
    & also, I'd agree with the comment below - PoeticMess has written a really good heterosexual Ronnie Radke fic :)
    June 8th, 2012 at 03:35pm
  • indigo.

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    Great update :)

    The best hetero Ronni Radke ff I've come across so far is Who We Are by PoeticMess. :)
    June 8th, 2012 at 08:07am
  • Maprang345

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    This is pretty good :D It's interesting, unique and most definitely has a catchy plot. There's really nothing negative to say about this story because it's great.

    Although there are only three chapters, I can tell this story is going to be really good.

    You've got another reader and subscriber, so that means you just have to update !!

    Everthing about this is amazing <3
    June 8th, 2012 at 06:52am
  • xXxMarchOfTheDeadxXx

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    Well, where to start! o.O I love Ronnie Radke stories. they are amazing just like him : ] I like how both Ronnie and Willow are writing back. I like the plot a lot and its actually very different. (at least it is to me) I hope you continue to update soon, because I wanna read what Ronnie sends Willow. Please?!!! But yeah, pretty good story so far.
    June 8th, 2012 at 06:13am
  • alyv08

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    Great update, loved it :)
    Here's a pretty good Ronnie hetero story. I'm addicted :)
    Trouble-Maker by PoeticMess.
    June 7th, 2012 at 03:53am
  • november_rain

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    WIN!!!

    xD First of all, you had me going with the chapter title there, i thought it'd be about a boy willow knew or somethin o_o or perhaps.........mark..........

    xD

    i frikin adored the cute moments with ronnie and charlie, though. :3 i also loved reading the whole part about "thats such a lie", considering we all know ronnie wont be there in 20 -.- and lord o.o this willow chick is like...syrupy sweet >.> she's so kind-natured, dude. i'm surprised she didn't tell him he was a beautiful soul for being kind enough to send her such a well written and thought out reply o_o the mailman laughing at ronnie's appearance was funneh, tew xD

    this chapter was EPIC. and i loved it. and i bet jacky's gon chew ronnie's arse out in the next ronnie-p-o-v chap >.>

    ily bestieFIRlifeeee <333 YOU MUST UPDATE, HOE! O_O

    Molly
    June 7th, 2012 at 03:32am
  • Halloweenlover

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    I like your idea so far. It seems like you could make your story go lots of different places. Keep on writing you’re pretty good at it!! Don’t worry about what haters say about this story, it’s gold so far. Please update soon, I can’t wait to read more!!
    June 7th, 2012 at 02:57am
  • Mary-Alice White

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    I like this idea. It’s new to me anyway. I have yet-besides just now reading yours- read anything like it. The whole letter thing is a brilliant idea. You were able to capture my attention and I was able to read it without any problem. Good job. Keep up the good work. I can’t wait to read more.
    June 6th, 2012 at 07:10am
  • indigo.

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    It's Ronnie. It's Ronnie.

    If you couldn't already tell, I'm beginning to fall in love with this man. I mean, I'm not a fan - not by a long shot, but I've found myself enjoying ff about him recently. Yes, he seems like a very nice man to love.

    I’m sorry if you consider that an invasion of privacy, but I have no concept of that word. That line is such a win. This story is a total win. I cannot wait to read more :)
    June 6th, 2012 at 03:43am
  • Mr. Darcy

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    The summary is good. Okay that was lame, but seriously, I think the summary gives a good introduction to the story and about how it comes to her sending the letter which reaches the stranger which then starts the whole story.

    "I’m sorry if you consider that an invasion of privacy, but I have no concept of that word." I have to say I really liked this line in Ronnie's letter. It actually made me laugh. Haha.

    Major props for Mark being from England. And from Surrey at that. I have a soft spot for characters who come from where I was born and raised for half my life.

    You also added a cat which scores major loves from me because I'm such a cat person!

    I love how it was curiosity that prompt Ronnie to read and reply the letter, and it'll probably be that which prompts her to replying back to him. (Well I assume it will be, I could be wrong.)

    Anyway, I'm interested to see how Willow and Ronnie will interact through the letters. Can't wait to see how you do it.
    June 6th, 2012 at 02:08am
  • november_rain

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    ....................o_o

    i iz LOVING this! x) "I have no concept of that word" = the biggest win ever.

    i adore the cat. tired as he may be, he is a companion nonetheless x3 i enjoyed reading the letter, and also LOVE your tendency to put uber detail in xD [like the silver 2010 mazda 3 o_o - which, btw, is a nice as hell car o.o http://www.theautochannel.com/news/2009/10/28/482892.4-lg.jpg ] as you well know, i love your style of writing, doll, and this was epic xD ESPECIALLY for being written so late at night. o_o anywho - i really, really loved this, and i would FREAKING ENJOY GETTING TO SEE THE NEXT CHAPTER WITHIN THE HOUR but since that's asking a /bit/ much, i shall say that you must update soon! o_o seriously, though, i really wanna know where this goes. O_O

    i love this, bestie. and if you don't update, i will come after you.

    ily bestieFIRlifeeee <333

    Molz
    June 6th, 2012 at 12:00am
  • Zachary Merrick.

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    This is a really nice idea, and is really interestingly written. I love the show of just genuine curiosity that leads to Ronnie reading the letter in the first place.

    I'm really interested to find out what happened between Mark and Willow and how it lead to this point, too.
    June 5th, 2012 at 03:48pm
  • indigo.

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    I almost squealed like an idiot when I first read the summary. I LOVE STORIES LIKE THIS!!!

    THEY ARE, LIKE, MY FREAKIN KRYPTONITE!

    alfj llllkj k

    Ok. To be constructive now. Oh lord. I can't. I love this story, and I'm sorry that I can't be more constructive because all I'm doing is hoping that you update like, tomorrow or the minute after this or sooooon as. I need to know what happens to this guy and Willow. NEED TO KNOW!
    June 5th, 2012 at 10:12am
  • been_waiting

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    DUDE ITS TRUE THOUGH OMG!!!!
    June 5th, 2012 at 08:34am
  • been_waiting

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    So how long till we find out what's going to happen is this unamed man going to find willow or mark?
    and what does he mean crazy fangirls? i am so lost ahahahaha e need more
    ASAP!!!

    AND WHAT DID HAPPEN TO WILLOW AND MARK
    YOU NEED TO UPDATE OH GOD
    June 5th, 2012 at 08:12am
  • been_waiting

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    So how long till we find out what's going to happen is this unamed man going to find willow or mark?
    and what does he mean crazy fangirls? i am so lost ahahahaha e need more
    ASAP!!!

    AND WHAT DID HAPPEN TO WILLOW AND MARK
    YOU NEED TO UPDATE OH GOD
    June 5th, 2012 at 08:12am
  • been_waiting

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    So how long till we find out what's going to happen is this unamed man going to find willow or mark?
    and what does he mean crazy fangirls? i am so lost ahahahaha e need more
    ASAP
    June 5th, 2012 at 08:12am
  • seized ships

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    I love this. I'm definitely subscribing in order to someone live vicariously through Willow. To be quite honest, the is the most original idea for a story I've ever seen, so props for that. Oh how I wish that could happen in real life! Love this storty already. X
    June 5th, 2012 at 04:50am
  • november_rain

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    i LOVE it. o__o

    if you do not continue this, i will eviscerate your viscera and watch as your entrails slide all over the tiled floor of your kitchen. O_O

    demented? yes. wrong to threaten such a thing for the sake of the continuation of this story? NO. 8)

    YOU MUST UPDATE, CHILD. i loved this. especially the fact that this chick who's apparently all over him and doesn't know how to be nice to him was kicked out :3 sweetneessss. i am curious as to where this will go from here, UPDATE! <3

    ily bestieFIRlifeeee <333

    Molz
    June 4th, 2012 at 07:11am