Letters - Comments

Chapter Three:

N'aww, that's so cute that she wrote back, and he was even kind of excited to read it. ;) But pit bulls are adorable dogs, and yeah, it's a Ronnie dog all right. Down to the wire. And gotta love lying through texting. Doesn't texting make it so much easier to bullshit the people you care about? But so far, yes, I like this very much. And to think I had almost forgotten about Ronnie not being able to whistle, but as soon as he tried, I remembered the tweet. xD

Chapter Two:

N'aww, I like that she teaches kindergarten because that's when the kids are still young and cute. And I liked Ronnie's letter, specifically the part about him having no concept of the word privacy. I don't either, so it's all good. 8D But now I want to know what kind of comic books Mark read, because you know I'm all into that stuff now, and I feel like I was meant to find this story at this stage in my life because of that reason alone. >.> But I like Willow. She's realistically portrayed. <3

Hey, guess who's ready to comment rape you? 8D

Chapter One:

God, I don't like Alexa. Never have, never will. But man, it really does suck to get those letters addressed to people who used to live at your address. I've gotten them before, and you just feel sad when you get them because, well, what are you going to do? But I like Ronnie's plan of action. And even if you don't like the layout maker, the layout is beautiful. I also enjoy the short paragraphs. It's just a personal thing. <3 On to comment the next chapter. <3

Also, the idea of Ronnie teaching kindergarten just makes me giggle. I would kill to have him teach me my colors and letters and how to play nicely. <3333

Also, the idea of Ronnie teaching kindergarten just makes me giggle. I would kill to have him teach me my colors and letters and how to play nicely. <3333

I love Ronnie Radke anyway, but I really, really like what you've done with this. It's an interesting idea, using letters, and it's not one that's usually done well, but you have. It's very intriguing and it works very well.

I really like your layout, even if you don't like the new layout maker. XD

I really, really, really, love this story and I can't wait to read more! Also, Ronnie is just beautiful. <3

I love this story. Wow, it's adorable. Sometimes people botch stories with the whole "letter-dialogue-within-story" thing, but this is well done. kudos! :)

Looking forward to the next update!

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i freaking loved this chapter. o_o the way she's all giggly and happy now about everything that happens is just so ridiculously cute. it's painfully obvious there's.../a boy/. O_O i really freakin enjoyed reading ronnie's letter, simply because i can imagine him having spent like 53423456hours going through and making himself sound as proper and well-written as he possibly could, once he found out she was a teacher. x'D (like we discussed o_o) and i noticed ronnie said that his job requires lots of traveling, but didn't find literally any need at all to further describe what that job is. x) and also, noticed that he said "a few [tattoos] of my own"... ... ...lolol, understatement of the year! xDDD and nice way to be a total meanieass, senorita sister o_o that was unnecessary bitchness, in all forms of the term. o_o >.> i use that face too often.

IN OTHER NEWS.

i love the whole moment with the spazzing while trying to grab her phone and pull up her jeans at the same time. x') that is so something i could see her doing o_o the imaginationz, it runz wylde.

lol, wylde. zakk wylde. xD

but really, dude, like, seriously, srsly guise, guise srsly, this chapter was all sorts of rad. i loved reading it...o_o you heard me giggle multiple times, so you already know this. but...still. O_O i loved it and DAMN YOU, DRAGON DICTATION.

^^ i just had to x'D

I LOVED THIS AND YOU MUST UPDATE, CHIL' <3

ily bestieFIRlifeee <333

Molz

P.S. i love you, bestie

Oh this so refreshing. I'm glad I came by this. It's a sweet, cute and heart warming story. Your characters are gradually improving and coming along, you're not racing through this story and we're getting description and background information as we go along.

Keep on writing and take your time. This isn't a marathon, so you've got time. Well done!

Hey im a comment swapper. I have just read your story and i really enjoyed it. The whole concept kind of reminded me of The Perks of Being a Wall Flower with the whole letter writing and not really knowing the other person kind of thing and i loved it. Usually i dont like short chapters but with your idea it really worked and it kept the story simple and fresh. You have obviously thought carefully about your plot and characters and it has clearly shown. Congrats. Oh by the way i've subscribed :)

Oh my, I love it. The plot idea is really original and that's what I loved about it. Keep writing please. You're very talented. And I just subscribed. (:

I'm glad comment swap brought me here. This is a good and refreshing story so far. I like the fact that Ronnie isn't described as batshit insane and that he's taking the time to respond to Willow. The chapters are short and sweet and I hope to get to know more about her soon. Also what happened between her and Mark. You've gained a subscriber. :)

This is getting really good!

It's odd that I'm reading this and watching Keeping Up with the Kardashians and just dang. I want to look away from the t.v but I can't. Strange. Heh.

Anywho. Awwwhhh ... it's so sweet that Ronnie wants to know more about Willow. And the tattoo. I swear I was expecting you to go on a monologue about how Ronnie's imagining the tattoo snaking up Willow's thigh all sexy like. Haha. Things need to get started !! Woohoo!

x_x this storeh. is seriously. amazing. o_o

first of all, i absolutely adored Willow's letter. she was so sweet to him, and like... let out a few more than one detail, which i freakin' love x) and that tattoo. o_o can you say risque? baha, you KNOW ronnie is sitting there, trying to picture that tattoo and wondering what the hell it's of. xD

i absolutely love the way this is going; just to put that out there.

but back to what i was saying - i LOVE her description of herself; because her description doesn't just describe her in its words so plainly, but like...in the way she describes herself, she's unknowingly describing even more of herself. ...if that makes any sense at all <_> I noticed that Ronnie was just totally lit with joy when he finished reading that letter. it's so cute, dude, holy lord o_o_o

then, his clingy little...LOL, Klingon! x'D but seriously; Vega has a key? wtf? I can just SEE ronnie's annoyance as he realizes she seriously just let herself into his house. -.- like, wtf, dude. -.- she needs to lay off <_> but then, she's all HEY WHUTS YERR NEXT ROCK SHOW?! ERR. MERR. GERRD. and he's just... i just... at that moment, all i was thinking was "HEY YOU, YEAH YOU, ALEXA VEGA, LOOK, AN ATTRACTIVE, FAMOUS MAN IS OVER THERE, WILLING TO HAVE BABIES WITH YOU AND MAKE YOU MORE FAMOUS!" and watch as she left ronnie eating her dust and threw herself at the cardboard cutout i'd set out on the street outside the house.

but before i go on elaborating that thought, i'll tell you that this chapter was amazing.

yeah, yeah, i loved it.

mhm. i did.

LIKE MORE THAN I SHOULD HAVE. LIKE.

I seriously cannot wait to find out what ronnie replies with and how Mr. Poo-Poo Kitty fairs when he realizes his dear mummy is falling for a masked man sending her mysterious letters. :'3

UPDATE THIS, HOEBAG! I LOVE IT! seriously o.o



ily bestieFIRlifeeee <333

Molz

Loved the update!

comment swap;
This is really interesting. :) I like how you describe things and the sentence structure doesn't seem like a bore to read. It's good, keep up the good work!

LOL.

I loved this, dude. x'D there is nothing wrong with being a cat lady o_o srsly. guise... srsly. srsly, guise. o_o but on the reals xD i also adored ronnie's little "give me a small detail". he wants to get to know her and it's so cuuuute :3 cuz, yknow, they'z coot :3 and like...the formal, but not formal, sense to his letter also shows that he was nervous. which i love. the 'humdrum' of his life? lol xD i find that funny because when he isn't at home, he's touring the country and screaming into a mic on a nightly basis while his big pit bull doggeh watches him <_<

SPEAKING OF DOGS. charlie and mr poo poo kitty should become best friends o_o

yes, yes, i believe they should. o_o

ANYWAY. i would love to see where this goes from here O_O_O_O_O what shall Willow's small little detail be? xD

UPDATE, WHORE! i say that with all the love and affection in my heart 8)

ily bestieFIRlifeeee <333

Molz

I love this, this is such a unique idea! Can't wait for more!

I really love the idea that these two are commuinacation through letters and have no clue about the others life. Like yourself im not homophobic but it was nice to find a Ronnie Radke story featuring a girl, especially yours, as I find it well written with a lot of thought put into the plot and description of movements and information that isn't the letters. There is a certain attention to detail in your story that just jumps out at me. I really look forward to the next chapter..