Okay, it's been months. I'm dying. What do I have to do to get you to update this story?!?!?!? I like your other alright but this one is BETTER. Come back!! Pleeeeeeeease!!!!
Just read through this, and I really like it. I love that Isabella kind of teaseds Loki when teaching him new things. And god, the sexual tension is killing me! I hope you update this because I would love to see where this goes.
Haha! He screamed like a little girl! Classic! x'D hehe, I like this story as well. The writing style, the well written chapters, like in fall from grace. The just right amount of details, mood and feeling in it. It makes it more easy to fall into the story and some how see and live it. I like the characters, how they are portrayed, how they act, how they are build up and sort of explained and how they interact with one another. I find it believable in this setting/universe. Plus he screamed like a girl. So worth the read xD subscribing! Recommending! And waiting for even more
I loved the ending and how it showed him not really caring anymore about the dirt on his seat. I mean I know it was something subtle, but it was a bug change for him. Oh and I sat here laughing when Isabella screamed at Thor and threw her pillow at him. I can't wait for the next chapter
This chapter just kept making me laugh throughout the whole thing. I could imagine the girl like scream he let out when he was falling from the cliff, oh man that is just a golden moment. I would be laughing my ass off and the way he was so scared throughout the whole thing, pst, he is of Asgard and there is little he fears my ass! The landing was some what adorable even if he did almost kill Isabella in the process and my favorite part was when Juan winked at Loki and he was completely clueless as to why he winked at him and Isabella told him not to worry about it. The chapter was great as always
YES! finally some sweet goodness. That ending was so adorable! Loki blushing has got to be the cutest thing ever. I enjoy reading this story and can't wait till the next update.