June 26th, 2012 at 03:33pm
I like what you did with Thor. He's usually the hero everyone loves, but it's nice to see him getting in the way a bit. And you keep him in character all the while. <3
Loki. I love Loki. You're showing his humanity grow in a very natural and adorable way.
Isabella is just such a great leading woman. Those strong-headed type are always the most fun. Perfect to go up against Loki.
And I absolutely adore the way you describe life in Rio. It seems like paradise. <3
You're doing a fantastic job with the story so far. Your characters are great, quirky, fun. This whole thing is quirky and fun. Love it.
Bahahahaha! The way you portray Thor in this chapter is just hilarious! xD
I just love how you keep everyone in character all the time! Its so magnificent!
YAY! They're making progress! :D