Ouch, that has got to leave a bruise for Loki, but it was it was his fault in the first place so he probably deserves it. But ouch still. Nice in any case, please update ASAP
Chapter 3 and I can already taste the sexual tension ;) it tastes a bit like poptarts. But maybe I'm just hungry. Anyway, Isabella is awesome, and I love how she puts Loki in his place! Whoo, you go girl.
Looking into this, I wasn't all too positive I was going to enjoy this fic because of its subject matter wing one I wasn't too familiar with. But you managed to draw me in, and I read both chapters and thoroughly enjoyed them! Your writing style is very good, and I'm looking forward to more chapters soon! :)
Thank you for making the story content a solid color so I won't be so distracted lol I love how you brought her life into this chapter and how she reacts around others. I am interested to see how Loki is going to react with all of this.
This chapter has made me smile through and through, though I have to say that the background picture is a little too distracting to say at least. Maybe something more neutral will be more pleasing to the eye, having a picture of a beach is a little distracting. I can't wait to see what Isabella does with Loki.