Cherub - Comments

  • ooocreepy

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    You are very welcome for the comment. Your story definantly deserves it and I hope you continue writting for a long time :)
    June 18th, 2012 at 11:22pm
  • Katie Mosing

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    I had a little bit of trouble reading the layout, so that's something you might wanna think about!

    I think this story is really inspiring! You have an amazing plot and Cherub is a really interesting character.
    I like the way you describe her illness. You do it in a way that makes it easier to understand. You also do an excellent job describing the way the illness effects Cherub. Her emotions seem real and you did a very good job with them. I also love her relationship with her cat, Erwin. It's exactly how I picture a recluse interacting with their pet!
    June 18th, 2012 at 07:37pm
  • Lakersgirluk_97

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    :O this such a intense story line i love it !! the uniqueness off it makes sooo interesting. keep updating :)
    June 18th, 2012 at 07:36pm
  • taste my dream

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    I don't know if this will make sense, but I really like the way this is written because it just seems so dream-like. I enjoy the characters, especially Kristofferson. I find him to be the most interesting. I can't wait to see where their adventure leads him and Cherub to :)
    June 18th, 2012 at 09:56am
  • ooocreepy

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    I really love this story. I think that it is extremely unique, I've never read a story quite like it and I really hope that you keep this story up. :)
    June 12th, 2012 at 07:27pm
  • ULTERIOR

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    Aw, thank you so much! You are greatly appreciated! I'll keep updating and keep doing my best.
    June 6th, 2012 at 08:12am
  • purpledragon1995

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    Really love this story, keep updating <3
    June 6th, 2012 at 08:07am