Super Nova - Comments

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NOOO! WHY MISTIC? WHY?

AVENGER TIME! xD
You are such a beautiful storyteller. So jelly right now.

I'm still sad Mystic died though. :(

I love how absolutely amazing this story is.
"I do not need your love, you disgusting mutt!" Talk about harsh. Blade, you stupid, cruel asshole!

a;lksjdfasdlfj;sadfj! I love this story so much!

Wonderful update! Poor Kiami though. No love for her, the one that can actually love. :/

I love how you wrote Bastet's dialogue. I can hear it all in my head so clearly; I really love how she cares for Nova and her maternal nature is clearly seen.

But at the end of your long and hard journey you will find love with one whom has the eyes of a Hawk."
Haha, I see what you did there. ;) Lucky, lucky, Nova.

I love that line too!!! xD Its not cheesy; its legit!

This is just so- wow. Wonderful, amazing, magnificent, majestic, wondrous, any and every beautiful word in the human language. The characters flow off the page and the vibes the entire story exudes gives a person chills. I love this, I love this I love this I love this. It's one of the best things I've read on Mibba, honestly. I cannot wait for the next update, and I can't wait for Nova to find hr happiness with those Hawk eyes ;)

I can't ever really wrap my head around stuff like this because it seems sort of syfy-ish, I suppose, but I do like how well it's written. It sounds like you know what you're talking about, like you have everything planned out, your description was done well, and I was able to sort of follow along even though I don't...really....know what this is about.

Crazy twists! I feel bad for Blade that Nova denied him and even worse that Apep is his father...:/
Loved it though!

You rewrote this again. Sweet Judas. -.-
This was so sad! :( You made me almost cry for the poor, little girl!!!

Lovely restart! Can't wait to see where this goes!

Little me from Comment Swap to tell you how much I like your story:)
First I think I should say that I'm more of a band fic girl but that's the beauty of Comment Swap you get to try different things.I had to read A Kellin Quinn fanfic once and now I love them.This is interesting so far with you only having a prologue and a chapter one.I've been experimenting lately.Like the comment below I also love the simple yet elegant layout.Keep working on this story

Hii :) Comment swap brought me here :)

First things first I LOVE the layout, it's simply amazing without being too over the top or anything . This story, generally speaking isn't something i'd search for in order to read, but honestly it looks pretty interesting from what I've read so far- which is what you posted !

I'd be glad to read some more, in order to shape a better opinion on your stories characters:) So far, I must say I LOVE the cat :3

All in all, great work, subscribed and looking forward to reading some more :)

It said I didn't write you a long enough comment to be sufficient for the comment swap. So, I'm going to write a bit of nonsense. I hope you're doing well. I mean you've only written two chapters but good writing takes time and I always take my sweet time to get my chapters out. Anyway, like I said before, keep up the great job that you are doing. Hope all is well! Can't wait to read the next installment! Hope your summer was full of adventure.

Hey girl. Love your writing. It's very good, I admire it. I like that you're writing about gods. I've always found that an intriguing topic. Keep up the great work!

I love Mystic! She's just a serious BAMF.
Don't like Blade. He's a jerk, I hope he dies a painful death. :P
Great update! Loved how Nova fought the thugs! Very exciting!!!

Via comment swap also! xP
1. I really like your layout! It's simple and easy to read, and it adds something to the story as opposed to stealing the spotlight.
2. I like how you described the "feather in her amber hair," a lot. I really like that character as a whole.
3. I like all the names of the Gods. Very creative.
4. "Mutters arose and voices shattered the silence." Legit, that's a brilliant line.

via comment swap. ;D

HOPY SHIT. Ancient Egypt fanfiction. Have I died and gone to heaven. Holy fucking shit. You have no idea how much I love Ancient Egypt stuff. When I was younger I used to know the Egyptian alphabet and I could write in limited heiroglyphs and I knew all the gods and everything. It was gr9. My favorite was always Bastet until I discovered Serqet and I freaking love spiders/arachnids of any kind so now she is. ;D haha. Anyway. Good job getting everything correctly. It's hard to remember the Egyptian gods because there's so many of them and they're kind of complicated, lol. Although not as complicated as Greek gods, I don't think. D; The legend (would that be the word for it?) seems very authentic and the language fits it perfectly. The moods and characterization all seem to be well-written.

One thing I did notice is that you kept writing "God's" and "Goddess's" for plural forms of 'god' and 'goddess'. What it should be is 'gods' and 'goddesses' (or capitalized if you prefer, I'm just pointing out the apostrophe). That seemed to be it, really. :) <3

Okay here from comment swap and am going to comment on things as I read them, so will be in chronological order haha :P

First mistake I noticed, is where you've put: 'The creator himself—Ra—was taking his place in a world that mortals below him could no see'... I assume thats meant to be 'not'
Also there is no full stop after: 'Turning tail, she crouched, springing through the cloudy mist and vanishing into the land that belonged to Upper Egypt'

Okay they're the only mistakes I could find, and they're only little, hardly-important ones so thats great!

But the story, is great! I'm not overly familiar with the avengers, (as much knowledge as the next, average person) and for this reason, the plotline is not really my style of reading, but I enjoyed it nonetheless! Your writing style is absolutely fantastic, and even as someone who has very little interest in the topic of this, I find myself enjoying it, and wanting to read more!

Really beautifully written, great job!
By the way, sorry for the sheer length of this comment. I have a bad habit of listing exactly what I thought about the fic. xD

Really excited to see where this is going! So detailed, but not overdone. I really really like it. You are a really good writer, and I could see this story working out really well and becoming a work of art :)
Also, this is already pretty intense, especially for a prologue! Go and show everyone what you got! I am certainly going to subscribe to this. Update soon!

I thought it had oomph before and wad awesome before!!! But this is just as terrific! I can't wait to see the part Blade will play in here now!

I'm here from comment swap.

Reading the prologue, I can say that you're amazing with words. Your description was just lovely and to die for, and at the same time there wasn't an over-flow of it, it was perfect. The idea of the story is something I have not read, or seen on this website.

Unfortunately, I'm not too familiar with The Avengers, and it's not my cup of tea, but please don't feel discouraged. You're a wonderful writer, and i hope you keep it up!
:)