Heartbeat Slowing Down - Comments

What I most want to see is Vicky get better. Then Jon get better, too. He could also use some counseling. I'd be ok if this story ends with both of them in a better place, not together. The sequel could involve them several months in the future, maybe the next season, when they are both in a better place. More mature, etc. They could met again and then see if things work out. Take it slow and do things the right way.

I feel like the way the story has been set up, how their characters have developed, Jon and Vicky aren't really meant to be. I feel like their not good for each other. They challenge each other in a way that I think is unhealthy. I think they should forgive, heal, and be friends. Maybe then they could make a relationship work.

So I'm a hopeless romantic.. So of course I'm expecting Jon and Vicky to end up together. I get so excited whenever I see that you've updated this story. Please update soon! I want them to end up together!

I feel like the way the story has been set up, how their characters have developed, Jon and Vicky aren't really meant to be. I feel like their not good for each other. They challenge each other in a way that I think is unhealthy. I think they should forgive, heal, and be friends. Maybe then they could make a relationship work.

Honestly, even though he hit the wall next to her it was horrible. Yeah he's mad but that's childish and scary. She even voiced her fears and he still did it. No wonder why she was a wreck. I'd be scared of him one day hitting me instead of the wall. But, all-in-all, I think they both deserve a happy ending. She needs to get some help from an outside source and see that it's okay to forgive Jon and accept him into her life again.
Please update again soon!

Well I really didnt thing that Jon would actually hit Vicky. Yes he has done some pretty stupid things and I know he was frustrated with her but no matter what mistakes Jon has made along the way, I truly believe he loves her and would never physically harm her. Pounding the wall beside her, yes....hitting her, no way.

Lexi deserves a gold medal for empathy for the way she dealt with Jon. After seeing Vicky in an emotional mess, knowing all Jon had done to contribute to Vicky's crash, Lexi still found it in her heart to listen to Jon and understand where he was coming from. She could see his pain was not only due to the concussion and she tried to soothe him as she had done with Vicky. Lexi is a saint.

But you have to love Kaner. He stood up to his friend/captain and called him out on his behaviour in this whole fiasco. Kaner was a true friend to Vicky - ripping Jon a new one...something Jon has deserved for some time! But in the end, Kaner relented. Seeing that Jon was really hurting, and rather than kicking him when he was down, Kaner decided to be Jon's friend too and stay with him to make sure he was going to be ok.

Happy ending....well I am happy that Vicky is going to get the help she needs to heal - both physically and emotionally. I am also happy that Jon finally came clean with everything and admitted that he was the asshole in all of this. And finally I am happy that Jon is finally putting Vicky first and giving her space - as long as Lexi promises to watch out for her.

But for Jon and Vicky to ever get back together there would have to be a lot of rebuilding. They both have so much healing they need to do personally before they can think of a relationship. Vicky will have to rebuild her self esteem and Jon will have to rebuilt the trust that he destroyed with all his lies.

It wont be easy....but definitely worth a sequel!!

I definitely think there is a lot they need to work on before they get together again. They both have their demons, but they are working on getting better, which is the first step. Hopefully they can work it out, but they definitely need the time apart so they can each work on themselves and improving themselves. Lovely update though! I always love when you update! So excited for the next update :)

I think that maybe, for this story, it could end with them each getting help and then becoming close again. Then for your sequel it can turn into something more? I dunno lol but I really would like to see them taking time to get personal help & becoming friends (I guess you could say) again :) sorry for the long comment haha

I want a happy ending and them starting a great future together in the sequel.

i think they should end forgiving each other but not necessarily together, gotta save some hard work for the sequel

I think they need to work some before they have a chance together.

Yay update!! And I really hope for a happy ending with them being together because no matter what they love each other. But Jon needs to get over his concussion and Vicky needs to get all the help she can and be back to her normal happy self before anything happens. But I am REALLY hoping that they end up together and happy.

Please update soon! I really wanna see how this turns out!

I like that you didn't have them getting back together right away after everything that has happened. Sometimes that happens too fast. Vicky has a backbone and I like it!

Keep it up!

ahhhh!! ur back yay im so happy and dying with the chapters its crazy good! cant wait for the next one :))

Great story, love reading it!

please update!!!!

Um... Umm....UMMMMMM pleasedon'tleaveitthereineedtoknowwhathappensnext.

I feel like he hit the wall but ah, so good! I'm glad Vicky stood her ground with Jon and finally opened up to Lexi

No no no don't hit her pleaseeee 8-(