Heartbeat Slowing Down - Comments

Oh, no. They're probably going to send her to a hospital for a psych eval. I hope she's okay. But maybe this is where she needed to get to, to realize how different she's become and now she can truly get all the help she needs. Please update soon!

I hope Vicky gets the help she needs and starts getting better so her and Jon can start their future. Since you have the next two chapters ready, PLEASE post them. I so look forward to this story!

I as sad as I am to see Vicky finally reach her breaking point I am glad that it finally happened. Now she can embark on the long road to recovery.

This is what I have been waiting for Lexi to do. She showed that she truly is Vicky's best friend. Over the past few months, Lexi has been giving Vicky space to deal with her issues, waiting for Vicky to come to her - doing what she felt Vicky WANTED her to do. But today Lexi took control and did what Vicky NEEDED her to do!

Vicky needs help - help beyond what a friend, even a very best friend, can provide. And Lexi is going to see that she gets that help.

This one brought tears to my eyes! Vicky is going to be ok. It wont be easy but in addition to intense professional help, she has people who truly love and care about her!

Amazing chapter.

Whoa! That was a very intense chapter, but I think something I expected to happen eventually in the back of my mind. Something needed to happen drastically to Vicky. Another fabulous chapter and update! I am so excited to see where the story is going to go from here. Especially since Lexi is now going to make sure Vicky does everything she can to make sure Vicky does get better!

That was tragic but symbolically beautiful if that makes any sense whatsoever

This was definitely disturbing, but it was very well execute and necessary. I'm really hoping that Vicky can get past this low point and start getting better. I hope that she and Jon can hopefully work out their problems, too, that'll make everything much better. Hope to see an update soon!

Oh Vicky! I really hope she starts getting better soon, but she needs to forgive herself to move on. I really hope this was rock bottom and she can only go up from now on.

I really really hope they get a happy ending and I'm all for a sequel!! I can't wait to see what's going to happen and I'm glad that Vicky is getting some help and Jonathan is being honest. I love this, PMS

O gosh I hope there's a happy ending! sad ones just make me deppressed.

Amazing updates!!! Can't wait to see what happens!

I can't wait until the final chapters or the sequel! As for the ending, I think it'd be great for the two of them to take a break from each other and get better. And once they're all better, have Vicky confess all her thoughts like Jon just did. Or have Vicky start getting better and then help Jon through his recovery. Either way, I see these characters as pretty much inseparable, as far as endings go...

Love the writing :) Keep going!!!!

I personally love it I think Vicky and John should like end up both going to a therapist and then things would go from there but I think they should date in a sequel maybe

Sequel. Sequel. Sequel.

I think the story should end with them both getting the help they need! Then start the sequel with them being ready to fix the relationship!

I want a happy ending but I don't know if this story will be it for them. I think this story, they can end up as friends but not together. Maybe it can end with them both getting the help they need. They won't ever be out of each other's lives because of kaner and Lexi. If there's gonna be a sequel, they can meet again because of Kaner and Lexi.

I can't even predict what's going to happen next. Smh. They're both so broken and in love and stubborn. Space is definitely the best option. I shall wait until next time.

Woah. Absolutely loved both chapters. I'm so glad I woke up to both updates. It would have killed me to wait for the 2nd one. Always refreshing the page. Haha

As for Jonny and Vicky, I'm a sucker for happy endings so I hope they get theirs. Maybe not in this story but in the sequel. It's all very fresh and in real world people take a while to heal and be able to trust whoever hurt them again. Lexi said that when Vicky was ready to talk, she would find Jonny. Idk, maybe it could end with her reaching out and being prepared to start things over. Even if they stayed friends for a while first.

As for the chapters you posted, even though I I feel terrible for Vicky because she's completely broken, I can't help but to feel sad for Jonny. I know his behavior is inexcusable but he was hurting too. Their conversation had me tearing up. I'm really happy she stood for herself, though. He deserved to hear the things she said.

You're a fantastic writer. I can't wait for the next update. :)

I always like a happy ending! I think that after all the hurt everyone has been through, they deserve to end up happy. So glad you updated so quickly! :)

I always want the happily ever after. If I wanted things to end on a sad note I would watch the news!!! One of the reasons I read fiction is to escape into a happy ending. After all they have been through I really do hope they end up happy together:).