Heartbeat Slowing Down - Comments

I would just like to say a couple things. Firstly, this has got to be the best fanfic that i have ever read(including all genres). Your writing is amazing, and i couldn't stop reading this story and its sequel. I read both tales in about 2 hours nonstop staying up till 2 in the morning(oops :p). I couldnt go to sleep until i had read everything. I am so glad to have found your writing. I was enraptured with Vicky's and Jon's drama, and when Jon threw a punch, I was freaked out and just so ughhh( i dont really know how to explain it haha). I hope you keep writing because I will definately be looking forward to reading the sequel.

I wish I could be a little more sympathetic to Jon. I know that Vicky's depression is not his fault - Vicky was battling that demon long before she ever met Jon - but the vibe I keep getting from Jon is that he is always in the middle of his own private pity party. Yes, he has a lot to deal with with his concussion and the fall-out of what went down between him and Vicky, but I wish he would really take responsibility for his role in all this. Calmly, without yelling or feeling backed into a corner.

Vicky was still so worried about Jon, even after all she had been through, that she sent him the note telling him not to blame himself - she totally let him off the hook. I really wish that Jon had done something similar - written Vicky a note really apologizing for everything that happened and giving her support that she is doing the right thing. Tell her to get well and wish her the best. No promises for the future - just let her know he truly cares about her well-being.

And maybe that is what a good therapist will help Jon discover - that things are not all about him and his career. Good for Kaner for suggesting it! The voice of reason yet again!!

I cant wait for the sequel.

I loved this story and can't wait to read the update

if they dont end up together i dont think i can read your stories again. i want them to be together and her to finally be happy. start updating the sequel soon?

Oh my god. I can't believe it's over!!! I wasn't sure how you would end it but you did a great job. I'm hopeful that they end up together but I really want both of them to get the help they need. I can't wait to see where you take this story, these characters. I'll be patiently waiting for the sequel. This was amazing.

AHHHH! I can't believe this story is over! What a great ending though. I am excited to see what the sequel is going to bring for all of these characters I have grown to love over the past year :) Fantastic job! Can't wait for the sequel :)

I hope the epilogue is soon! I'm dying to see what happens.

waiting for the epilogue and the sequel is killing me. im so excited!! I can't wait to see what Vicky and Jonny end up being. Plus Lexi has been such a good friend so i can't wait to learn what happens with that relationship too!

I'm so glad Vicky is realizing she needs more help than she's been getting. And I love this side of Kaner again. But Jon is pissing me off right now. I know he loves Vicky but he needs to realize what is best for her.

Omg I can't for more!! Can't believe it's almost over!!!

cant wait for the sequel :)

So glad to see Kaner putting his foot down again and really making Jon think about his actions. So excited for the epilogue and the sequel! :) Lexi is such an amazing best friend for Vicky! :)

I'm so happy Vicky didn't fight this. This whole section is written so perfectly. Such a good balance between sensitivity and being blunt and real about it. Your writing is beautiful and I cannot wait to read the epilogue and sequel!

I'm glad she's accepting that she needs help, I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I love this!! PMS

Wow!! Your portrayal of such a sensitive subject is raw, real and spot on. Nothing changes with mental health without outside professional help. I love your writing:)

I'm glad Vicky is okay with having to be at the hospital and realizing that it's what's best. And I know all Jonathan wants to do is help, but he can't try to stop it. I can't wait for the epilogue and sequel! Hope you update soon!

Phenomenal chapter. I am so happy that Patrick finally stood up and is doing what needs to be done for Vicky. I wonder how Jon will take the news of what has happened.

Amazing!! I can't wait for the next two!

I'm glad that Patrick stood up and said that there was something wrong. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS

I'm glad that Patrick stood up and said that there was something wrong. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS