I absolutely adore this story. I love her character and I'm feeling some chemistry with her and Two-Bit? I do think the chapters are a little lengthy, but it's still awesome. Keep it up and update soon!
Your font color is way too close to the layout color which makes it really hard, if not impossible, to read but I did highlight the words so I could read the summary. It sounds like a really great idea and your writing seems pretty decent.