A Word Like Love - Comments

  • Sammy-Poo!

    Sammy-Poo! (100)

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    Wow, so far it's really good! I wasn't sure how I'd like it; I'm not really impressed with most of the stories on Mibba. But you have a natural talent for writing, I can tell. The way you write things, it just flows so gracefully. Anyways, keep writing, I'll definitely be subscribing! :)
    June 11th, 2012 at 08:49am
  • A Bittersweet Spell

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    I really love the summry it intrigues me to read teh reat of the story. Its hard to come by good true story but it is a really good one and i cant wait to read teh rest. The layout is beautiful and is fitting. Really good use of description words. It paints a good picture of your story and has such a good sense of imagry. I feel like im in the story
    great job im looking forward to reading more but i think i should start with the prequel ;)
    June 11th, 2012 at 05:47am
  • butterflywings16

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    Wow! I love this. I hope you get your fairy tale ending because it sounds like you deserve it. The words just flow like its a waterfall pouring into the water below. I just love it and I'm subbing for sure! (: Keep up the good writing!
    June 11th, 2012 at 05:46am
  • Evil.Red.Head

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    This story is really good, and the description and words flow easily and are hooking. Like the other commenter, I’ve never read a true story on here before; and yours sounds really interesting so far - a great beginning for sure!
    June 11th, 2012 at 03:34am
  • strigoi.

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    I was brought here by the comment swap feature. And I could've sworn I just commented like an hour or so ago, but it's saying I didn't so I guess I'll comment again. Lol.

    To start, I don't think I've ever read a true story on this site. I've only really read fan & original fiction, so that's very refreshing. :)

    I immediately smiled when I got to the page, because that picture of the red flowers is just beautiful and it reminded me of like...an open meadow in the spring time. By itself, I don't necessarily like the background. It sort of made me a bit dizzy. But I can see how it sort of matches with the tone of the story, so I was able to overlook it. :)

    The summary you've written is bitter sweet, but very intriguing. It definitely draws the reader in. I also like the prologue. You've described so much with such a short chapter, and I really liked that. I'm definitely subscribing. I can't wait to see where you take this! ^_^.
    June 9th, 2012 at 02:07am
  • I.Am.Me.

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    This is such a short and sweet start. It makes me wish there was more up already and I really can't wait for the next post. You have a great writing style and it suits what is up so far, and I hope it continues to fit the story. Subscribing for sure! :)
    June 8th, 2012 at 09:55pm
  • Gypsy Soul

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    This sounds beautiful and amazing just from the summary. And it is amazing. Subscribed... And waiting. I love the layout. It reminds me of special candy canes during Christmas. And the flowers in the picture are precious.
    June 8th, 2012 at 06:10am
  • Desi Galaxy

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    I really what you have so far! I'm definitely subscribing! You get a feel for the person she is in the first chapter and I really like that. Layout is cute, pretty simple. I can't wait to read what you come up with next! Keep up the good job! :)
    June 8th, 2012 at 06:00am
  • Velvet.Tears.

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    Beautiful. The prologue is short and sweet, but is still making me want to read more and more! I am subscribing! I can't wait to read this. You have a great sense of writing, that you have to continue! :)
    June 8th, 2012 at 05:43am