Loverboy - Comments

Comment swap is being unfair. totally commented. I guess I'll just have to say more good things. I thought it was really cute. And you can go almost anywhere you want to with it! A very solid start.
P.S. I think Nathan Sykes is absolutley adorable!

It was so fun to read! Just the perfect mix of not boring, yet not overly dramatic. That's so hard to find! I'd like to read more!

I like your writing style! And Nathan Sykes? Yum. : ) I like that you put their outfits into the author's note. I'm a visual person, so I like things like that. : D Keep up the great work.

So completely ignore my first comment. I'm still getting used to this whole comment swap thing. Comment swap sent me here. I don't really know much about The Wanted, but I'm sure people that are a fan of them would love this story. Keep up the good work and it does seem like an interesting story so far :)

comment swap sent me here. your story seems interesting so far

I'm not gonna lie, I thought this was a ymas story. I literally screamed, then I saw it was a The Wanted one. Aha, it's really well written and very descriptive. I like your story, just not The Wanted. Ahaha, carry on with the great writing though. :)

I'm not quite sure what happened to my previous comment my dear, but I will say I'm loving this more and more as you write more. Though you probably like you are just saying that because your my sister, or you are in it, but that's not why. I truly do love this story so far, and Jay and Hennessy woot woot. Haha. Don't make me go after you for another update. :D

I just wanna start of with saying that you have a really, really nice way of writing. The dialog in the story is going on in a really realistic way and I really enjoyed reading what you put up so far! Nathan is really, really just so super sweet. :3 I love how he offered his jacket and to bring her home and then gets so shy-ish with the compliments! xD

Get upon this through comment swap.
I think this story would be really good for a The Wanted fan (I myself is obviously not one). By now, I think you leave the reader excited for what is going to happen. The plot could defiantly turn out interesting. I like your writing, it's descriptive without being too much. And it's above casual language. All in all, very nice. Good job. Keep writing. :)

Cherries! xx

I love almost everything about this story. It has good potential and the layout is cute. However, I'm not a big fan of Nathan Sykes. I honestly didn't know who he was. But I like just, how this story is. I like how you don't have to jnow who the band is or anything about them to read this.

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I like it, your writing is different to many others i have read. Following on from the comment below (anticlimactic.syn) you can make that 2 out of six who like The Wanted, and it seems you have their personalty's down really well, good luck !

I was reading the comments and found it sad that only one of the four people liked this band you're writing of. And now you have one of five. I am relieved, however, because the second I saw the name Sykes I thought "Oh hell no, this is a BMTH FanFic." Thank God that it isn't :D

Anyways you have such a beautiful story layout and a beautiful writing style to match. And I've never read a Fan Fiction where an OC meets a band through managing them, I like that idea a lot. Good luck with your story ;)

The wanted, hmmm. Nathan Sykes. Not a big fan at all, actually but I did like your writing. I liked how it was short, most stories first chapters just drag. Omg. But it was actually nice and descriptive. Hope you keep it up!

ohh, i've been looking for a The Wanted story and here it is....
So excited and i just cant hide it, haha!
Cant wait for the update :)

To be honest, I barely even know who The Wanted are, but that is really beside the point. It really seems like this story is going somewhere, and I hope your plans work out for it! I'll have to keep up with it and read more! Can't wait! Your background is very pretty too :)

I absolutely love this story!! I'm not a big fan of The Wanted, but I'm sure this story will get me hooked in no time!!