Who Knew Then? (What We Know Now?) - Comments

Such a close call. As soon as Jared came out after the game, you don't understand how much brain power I exerted trying to get him to go back and get away from Kass. I understand he is miserable and he wants her back, but I think he has a bit more to learn before he deserves to get back with her. He also has to get past how awesome I think Derek is right now lol. I know that Jared and Kass belong together, but we can make him suffer just a little bit more for the awful things he said to her. I think he should at least see her and Derek together. Taste of his own medicine. Awesome Job!

Just a side note, you should put in a little in text or chapter heading kind of point when you skip that much time. I was like, woah, wait a sec, she just left him and now its six months or whatever later. Future reference, try that so readers know what's going on! :)

I don't know sports, (at all) but I do kind of get this story because you don't FOCUS on the sport itself. When you mention changing and trading and camp, you lose me, but then the people bring it back. I find myself going "ohhhhhh" a lot with this...

I like the way you write and make it seem realistic. Your grammar is good. Keep writing

Oh and PLEASE update soon!!!! :-) <3

That was a quick 6 months! I'm really glad that the team has accepted her and that Marc is so good with being a "Step-in daddy." He is going to make a great dad! I feel kinda feel bad for Jared missing out on all the pregger-ness... And of course he would get called up for a Staal on Staal game. I'm glad that he hasn't let his game go to poop without Kass. It should be very interesting....

OH SHIT!!! I don't usually swear in reviews but that was totally needed! I should have, but I totally didn't see that comming! Holy crap this is going to get interesting! YAY! She found a Ranger to make Jared jealous! I am marking my favorite chapter! I totally loved this one from start to finish-not that I don't enjoy the others as well, I just like this one the most. I am so excited to see what happens! I enjoyed all the guys joking around and fighting over Kass. So adorable. The best by far was Marc and his awesome parenting-ness. He is going to be a great father, so he should get on it already! What's taking so long? I can't wait for another update!

Aw yeah! I'm down with the tough love from my favorite Staal! But I do feel bad for Jared now that he is blubbering like a baby. No one should be in that much emotional pain. Yay for the fact that he now wants to get married! That so awesome! I hope she says yes, but I think I already know she will. Unless she is now with some other dude Oh my! If Marc wasn't married it would be hilarious to see Jared jump to conclusions if he found out how close Marc and Kass are. Let alone the fact that Marc knew about the baby before him. I just found that scene that just played in my head extremely funny and had to share. Continue with the eldest Staal brothers on Kass' side because I am loving it! This story is amazing, so keep going!

Sad face with all the damn crying!! I love how the Staals all come together and are on her side. I kinda feel bad for Jared to... poor guy... well as Colby_Armstrong9 said it has to get worse befor it gets good and I can totally see Marc doing that too! :-) Can't wait! <3

Well things have to get worse before they are good right? So this is sort of a good thing because now he will go crazy and all awesome Jared to win her back. He's going to be a great boyfriend now because he remembers what it is like when she's gone. He'll never want to lose her again. This is good, I am convinced. He gets a taste of his own medicine with her gone for a while and when they get back together, they will be better than ever! And why do I get the feeling that if Marc does talk to Jared, he will slip about the bun in the oven? I can totally see it happening. I can't wait to see!

Poor Jarebear!!!! I get that he f-ed up but still!!!! I really really hope they talk it out soon!! AHHH Major sad face!! Je n'aime pas!!!!

Is it wrong that I think Marc crying was totally adorable? Because it was. I love that Marc is taking her side. I believe Jared is already aware of how stupid he is acting, but I think that if the whole family is against him, he will realize he has to fix it sooner and stop wasting time. OR he could continue to be a douche and the brothers will still have to talk some sense into him. I am still in favor of Jordan getting to verbally abuse Jared until he gets his crap together.

Ugh Jared you are so stupid! You made the only woman you love leave you with the unborn child you don't know about! Oh dear, I wonder what he will do when he finds out about the baby. I think he will be a little freaked out in the beginning but he will get over it. Maybe this will be the push he needs to ask her to marry him. They just have to make up because they just need to! I really liked this chapter and how sweet Marc was! Great job!

You need to stop making me cry. Its not nice. But I REALLY like how Marc takes her side and how he is there for her. Its really sweet. Please update soon! :-) <3

Personally, I hate these really short chapters. Just saying. Update soon because I need to know what Jared's going to do about this, he ain't that stupid.

Jared is getting what he deserves. You don't just fly off the handle at someone you spent five years of your life with. He should have known how hurt that would make her. Shame on him for thinking she was that shallow to move on that fast. He has a lot to make up for and props to Tanya for laying down the law! Grrrr, he pissed me off so bad I don't know where else to go with this. I feel bad for Kass, she has to be so heartbroken to have trusted a guy who would say those things to her. He is just an idiot. To stop myself from growling again, I will depart. Even though he is being an idiot, I still love him and this story! Amazing job!

Oh Jared..... poor guy.... while he brought it on himself i still feel bad for the kid... hope everything works out for them!!

I hope Jared knows what he's doing because she's pretty serious. I hope he gets some karma and finds out Kass is all close to Brody. He would flip out and that's what he gets because he is mean. They didn't call either lol. Anyway, i like Brody. He seems like a good guy. I really hope he stays a good friend to Kass, she needs it. It's coming together nicely. Awesome job!

You are breaking my heart.

Colby_Armstrong9 is right. I do think she is weird. I love her anyway. I love this chapter just because Tanya is so great and this Brody guy seems pretty kick ass too. I like him. Can we keep him please? Lol. Well any way I liked it and can't wait to read the Jared flip out cuz you know its coming. :-) <3

Darn, that was depressing. He needs to be checked if he is stable in the head. I don't know what it is like to get rejected from the NHL, but I do know how to work hard and not have it pay off. With that experience, I think he needs to get over himself and find comfort in his family. That includes his girlfriend he had been dating for five years. You don't take it out on the people who love you because you are sad. If you do that, even the strongest families can fall apart.

He needs to get his priorities straight or Eric needs to save his butt again. I love your Eric character. He is the perfect big brother and if anyone could get him through this tough time it would be him. Jared is going to be miserable with Kass not there and he will realize what a huge mistake he made and go be awesome Jared again. Then when she forgives him and tells him about the baby, he can be super excited and play all great and get called up. :) See he may not know it, but he has a plan!

Jordan can yell at him too if he feels like it too. Marc said he would make fun of him for screwing up with a girl in the prequel, so maybe that's what Jared needs. Eric can be supportive and and Jordan can make fun of him and between the two some sense might be knocked into Jared. He desperately needs some. Sorry I haven't reviewed on the last chapter or two, I promise I read them! I really liked this chapter, why? It was sad and I like those parts of stories. Ask Capt. Morgan, she still thinks I'm weird for loving the sad parts of stories. I just think it is good for character development. Awesome job!

You just enjoy making me cry... That totally wasn't cool. :-( Poor Kass... that was a lot to take in in one day... Jared is rediculous. I'm not saying I wouldn't act the same way but still. I feel bad for both of them and the baby. Sigh....