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  • Marinesister92

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    @ S a m .
    Hey,
    Thanks for getting around from the comment swap to do this. I do agree it needs a ton of editing unfortunately as of late, I have had zero motivation to write. I have also quit writing fanfictions as often as I used to. But one day who knows, I might go back and make this story far better than it is right now because it is absolutely 100% a rough read.
    October 6th, 2016 at 12:24am
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    Hey there, I'm from comment swap!

    I'm up to chapter 4 and its a decent story, but in my opinion, you could use some editing. Okay, a lot of editing. I think if you were to go back and reread parts, they wouldn't make sense to you either. I understand what you're trying to say, but there are so many words they get jumbled. Not trying to be mean, just honest. I do enjoy the story though.
    September 20th, 2016 at 07:39am
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    @ Thatmom @ MITCHEAE @ MoMo_92 @ Kenarik
    If you all were interested in subscribing or recommending the sequel I have the link up and the first chapter is up. Here's the link Accidental Dad
    -Sarah
    February 28th, 2014 at 02:58pm
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    February 27th, 2014 at 09:06pm
  • Thatmom

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    Love it!!!! So beautiful :) Sequel? Yes please!!
    February 27th, 2014 at 05:12am
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    love it, such a beautiful ending :)
    February 26th, 2014 at 05:40pm
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    @ Marinesister92
    : ) Noticed your name is Marine sister. I'm one as well. 3 older brothers 2 are in the military 1 army 1 marine
    February 20th, 2014 at 05:17am
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    @ MITCHEAE
    Haha, there might be little stall babies in the sequel if you all stick around long enough for that. but the sequel wouldn't be about Kelly persay.
    February 20th, 2014 at 03:46am
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    I want to see little Staal babies
    February 20th, 2014 at 02:59am
  • Thatmom

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    Great update:)
    February 19th, 2014 at 09:55pm
  • MoMo_92

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    love it, aww Missy had her babies anyhoo great chapter can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    February 19th, 2014 at 09:54pm
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    @ MoMo_92
    Thanks so much! It means a lot that you've stuck with this.
    February 19th, 2014 at 08:29pm
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    love it, great chapter, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    February 19th, 2014 at 06:11pm
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    @ MoMo_92
    Haha, you never know guys. She got real cozy with Danny too.
    January 20th, 2014 at 02:58pm
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    Does tht mean she picked Jordan, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    January 20th, 2014 at 05:26am
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    @ Thatmom
    Guess you'll have to read the update to find out. XD
    January 20th, 2014 at 04:45am
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    So glad she and Jordan are at such a good place in their relationship. Who's at the door?
    January 14th, 2014 at 01:25pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Who in the hell, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    January 14th, 2014 at 07:21am
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    Well I figured explaining it again after she had explained it to Danny was not the way to do it. but I'm hoping that it kind of gets the gist out there.
    January 10th, 2014 at 03:52pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Well thts one way to say u have money anyhoo poor Kelly and seriously Mike u got problems, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    January 10th, 2014 at 06:43am
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