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STILL AS GOOD AS THE DAY I FIRST COMMENTED ON IT ...and the last

WHY DIS SO PERF.

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I read the whole thing over instead of doing my homework and it was just as awesome the fifth or sixth time around, let me tell you.

(Forever the first, and the last, you will not be rid of me. )

no words can even explain how in love i am with this story!! the ending was just so wow! i totally think you should make a oneshot or something about matt bringing his dad to lunch and finding out his fiance is a guy not a girl.

Well that was just effing fantastic like I can't even look at you right now beCAUSE YOUR BRILLIANCE BLINDS ME LIKE WHOA HOLD THE PHONE.

I think I forgot how much I love gay secks until you give it to me

Btw, best ending line EVER, what are you even? The gaypornteenageangst writing god?

I am very sad about but very pleased with the ending of your venture into teen gayness. I can't wait for the next one(s) (because there will be next one(s).) Gotta keep the childrens happy

(Oh, and don't think I've forgotten about coda's )

(Sorrynotsorry that I half-assed this comment because I WOULD BE QUOTING EVERYTHING if we played that game )

I loved this story. It was brilliantly laid out, the plot took unexpected turns. The characters were very diverse... I never knew who Matt was going to end up with. I thought Daniel then I thought Corey then thought Brandon and it was a vicious cycle. I love that Matt wasn't perfect, he was selfish and different. It was all quite realistic and I liked it a lot. Very good :)

I just read this entire story and I can't tell you how much I enjoyed it! All of the characters are so artfully constructed and I have become emotionally connected to all of them. One of my favorite aspects of this story is Matt's relationship with his mom. It played such a key role in his character development and it also says a lot about him as a person. You are an incredible writer!

Tracy is on a trip to cape town and as we all know responsible bitches like you and me have shit to get done so I'm just going to have to comment again and keep commenting until she accepts defeat

we were the two biggest basket cases ever to be in a relationship that shouldn’t have worked
I like to call this 'The Acceptance' BECAUSE YES, THEY ARE

I liked to think we were just soul mates destined for each other and crazy enough to manage to make whatever-it-was real.
THAT'S SO GAY I LOVE IT

What it really was, was two people who’d put each other through a bunch of needless crap and were so scared of fucking it up, that they didn’t fight, they couldn’t go two days without seeing each other like a couple of psychos, and always had to have physical contact in some form.
Insecure and in love it just breaks my heart

The sex was desperate, quick and hands really didn’t know what they were doing. They just didn’t.
That sounds like the sex we have

“You’re cute when you’re being nostalgic,” Corey murmurs then kisses the side of my head.
So domestic those precious little bitches I wanna cry

“You knew what you were getting into.” I don’t miss the pun.

“And I kick myself everyday over it.”
Those. Precious. Little. Bitches.

“Good. I take pride in being the greatest mistake of your life.”
See above

“That was in Ireland! Look! There’s me and your grandpa!”
I don't want to repeat myself. That adorable little fuck.

Why do you make me feel because right now I have all these feelings and you know what sometimes I don't even start a tv or a fic because I think I'm going to get emotionally invested but look what you did you... you... bad word. I almost didn't have a choice with how you make me FEEL ALL OF THESE THINGS.

“Don’t worry, darlin’, your mam can’t keep secrets around us two. We’re old and we need some excitement.”
That's actually how I feel right now. I am Matt's grandma.

“I miss your grandparents,” Corey admits and I hum in agreement. They both passed away a few years ago, but I’m glad that Corey got to spend the time with them that he did. I don’t exactly have a big family.
HURTS

He presses a kiss to the back of my head and asks, “What time are you going in?”

“I have to be at the restaurant at six.”

“And you’ll be back when exactly?” I raise an eyebrow. If I give him a finish-time, that usually means…well, sex. I turn so I’m basically straddling him.

JUST... I WANT TO BE A GAY MAN SO I CAN HAVE THIS.

“No. I can’t. I’ve got all those papers to grade.”
Cory is a teacher

I’ve heard since moving to Paris.

to Paris.

to Paris.

to Paris.

WHY IS THAT PERFECT I JUST FEEL LIKE THEY WERE ALWAYS SUPPOSED TO END UP THERE EVERYTHING FITS.

I love how he became a cook to honor his food sexuality.

because all I want to do is run back to my bed and stay there in Corey’s arms forever, so I never have to see the world again.
That's the right answer. Logical boy, this one

“D-Dad?” I choke out.
OH NO. OH NO HE DID NOT. but he did, so...

I mean he didn’t come barging into the kitchen or anything – that would’ve been all too Hollywood – but he did send a waiter in with a message for me. Or rather his business card. I’m not even worth a personalised note.
GOD DAMMIT, MATT'S DAD. GOD DAMMIT.

“Co-rey!” I whine the moment I step in the door.
I like where this is going

“I saw my dad,” I whisper and feel him freeze next to me.
Okay, no secksy times, just FEELINGS

We’re another bottle deep now and I am ready for him to take me to bed, when his hands start shaking again.
I'm ready for the secksy times Corey get with the program

“Yeah. No. I mean I need to talk to you about something.”

“You’re not pregnant are you?”
Once you go man pregnant you never go back

Oh god, what if he’s dumping me? No, impossible. He let me sit on top of him for an hour just now.
Obvi person sitting is the ultimate testament of love

He closes his crystal eyes then drops to one knee.

Excuse me while I float away on a cloud like the princess I am.
SUCH A PRINCESS

“Matthew,” I love when he uses my full name. It’s not like when my mom does (because she’s usually pissed). “You need a ring on that finger.”
COREY IS HAM, AND I LOVE HAM, COREY IS LOVE.

Like ‘oh my god hell yes, take me now. I’ll even wear a dress.’

“I love you more than anything and you do too, or you’ve been lying to me for like, seven years. Will you marry me?”

“Yeah, that’d be cool,” I tell him nonchalantly then get to my knees so I can kiss his beautiful face. “Yes.”
THEY'VE BOTH BEEN UPGRADED TO BACON. I WORSHIP BACON.

I’ve never tried heroin, nor intend to, but I imagine this is what it feels like. I don’t think I’ve ever been so close to perfection as I am now. Which is understandable seeing as Corey’s kind of inside me right now…and he’s the most perfect person I know.
You know who else was heroin? Bella. Bella was heroin.

His fingers drag up my back on the way to the back of my neck. He gently pulls me closer so he can capture my lips once again. Sweat from my hair drips onto him but this is a regular occurrence. Sex is a nice, long, sweet process and, you know, sweating is just a bi-product. That sounded weird. Never mind.
No, yes mind. I sweat like a pig, does this mean I'm good in bed?

“Corey and I are engaged,” I blurt. I hear the phone drop. There’s a scramble and then a squeal in my ear. I hold the device out at arm’s length.

“Oh my god! Oh my god! This is so exciting! Finally! Oh wow! Congratulations! My boy is getting married! I can’t believe this!”

“Yeah, Mom. It’s pretty great.”

“You’ll have to come here for the wedding, right? Right?!”
MATTHEW GO BACK TO YOUR ROOTS MATTHEW GODDAMN THESE FEEELINGS

“Oh…you’re not pregnant are you?” I am definitely my mother’s son.
Mama Matthew is even on the man pregnancy train

“Mom, you of all people know that’s impossible.
It is with that attitude

Take a deep breath and knock.

Hyperventilate.

The door swings open and there’s my dad. Salt and pepper hair, slender build, strong nose and all. He looks older than I remember, but I think my transformation from a scrawny little kid to whoever I am now would have to be the real shocker.
Yeah I guess time makes you grow? (Oh nostalgia )

“I’m meeting my fiancé for lunch,” I say. “Um…you can come if you want?”

He beams at me.

“Sure, I’d love to meet her.”

I just laugh.

And here we are. this is done, and I am ruined, this is officially the longest comment that has ever commented and I hope it doesn't annoy you

THE TEARS ARE COMING THE TEARS ARE COMING. I CANT DEAL IT CANT BE OVER I LOVE THEM MEH

well... that was an emotional roller coaster ride. i came across this story because one of my friends recommended your blog - the one where you were promoting your story. rarely ever do i read anything that isn't avenged sevenfold fan fiction but OH my god. i am so glad that i did. this story has easily become one of my favorite stories on mibba. i related to it and the characters on so many levels. not necessarily the homosexual part, seeing as i am 100% straight, but their personalities. like i think i am Matt to a t, haha. anyway, i just wanted go say how much i loved this and i am really said that it's already over. and i am so thankful that i came across it. you're a very talented author and i can't wait to look at your other stories!

But I don't want to say goodbye :(

There are tears in my eyes. TEARS. Great story, great ending. I love the sense of closure. I'm gonna miss these guys. :(

MAH BABIES!!!!!!!
*gross sobbing*

So cute and such a perfect ending!!!!!
I wouod tell you I love it but im sure you know that already:)

Ack. I can't believe it's over. I would have liked to see Corey meet Matt's dad but this ending was pretty funny. Ah, I'm gonna miss this pairing but I can't wait for all the spin off goodies. Especially Brandon's.

i actually think i love daniel/kyle more than corey/matt which is RIDICULOUS
but what can you do you know?

*gets down on my knees and begs you*

(but apart from that i love how everything ended)
(and i also want a daniel/kyle story)
(please please pretty please)

NO
NO
NO
NO
NO
I NEVER WANT THIS STORY TO END
WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME

Update again soon ppppllllleeeeeeeaaaasssseeee!!!!!. I Love this stour