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So, that chapter was definitely worth the wait. Cant wait for the next one! Sooner, I hope? :P

AHHHHHHH I love this :D I want to hug everyone of the characters :D

WHAT IS THIS PERFECTION.

EXCUSE ME WHILE I FLAIL

****incoherence****

Sometimes you’ve just really got to put your head on your biology essay and think of the best way to win your boyfriend back.
I LIKE THIS KID. I LIKE HIM A WHOLE LOT. OKAY I LIED. I SORTA LOVE HIM. AND IN MY HEAD HE LOOKS LIKE EZRA MILLER. I LOVE EZRA MILLER. SO.

I love how you built all this anticipation over the EONS that you've made me wait for updates AND THEN IT'S EVEN BETTER THAN EVEN MY NAUGHTIEST THOUGHTS COULD COME UP WITH.

Matt just stood there, looked him in the eye, scratched his head and told him he ‘didn’t feel it anymore.’ What kind of break-up line is that?
LOL MATT OKAY. LOL. And a little sad for Ezra... I mean Daniel Err.

Daniel had come to the conclusion that the guy was constantly happy. It was sickening.
THAT'S BECAUSE YOU'RE THE PRETTY EMO BB. DON'T EVER CHANGE. IT SUITS YOU. BROODY SUITS YOU. (I love this little angst-filled love muffin. He doesn't even realise he's gonna get banged by hottie surfer dude... did I just type that )

That didn’t stop him from messing up Daniel’s hair on his way out.


Kyle has a habit of walking around the house shirtless like the weather is in a perpetual state of summer.

And Daniel had noticed.
Oh he has, has he LETS GET DOWN.

“I’m stopping you from bursting my ear drums by hitting you with some logic.”
THAT'S MY ALICE RIGHT THURR.

“So how’s it hangin’?”
The thought of you typing that with a straight face makes me >>

“Shut up! I’ll lose my nerve!”
LOLOLOL

You’re never around to have to deal with me. And it’s none of your business. You’ve made that clear.
Bah-bam Ouchies.

“He who hesitates masturbates,”
Jesus

Matt will be there, Daniel said in his text to Corey.

Thanks, was the one worded reply.
I love this little interwoven thing So perf.

“This…didn’t go right,” Kyle realised. “Um, sorry.”
HE'S SUCH A LITTLE BB I WANT TO SMUSH HIS FACE

“Shower for us,” Daniel amended with a smirk and Kyle beamed at him.
YEAAAH

I loved it! Especially the line about how hesitation brings about masturbation lol and their storys so cute:):)

omg daniel! kyle! jhguydtrshtrfjbihgukdtesygfgijknlijftrstfckujhvkjvfytdtfcj
LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aw, this chapter was just a bit cute :3

This might be one of my favorite things that you have ever done ever. Srsly, Alice. Srsly.

“He was too selfish for you. I mean, did he ever ask you about that club for queers you wanna set up or whatever? He was always complaining about something.”

He's a little doll, that Kyle

Kyle has a habit of walking around the house shirtless like the weather is in a perpetual state of summer.

Kyle BB, it's cold there. Your nips will be hard as icicles.

Kyle was Matt’s opposite; relaxed, cheerful and fun.
THAT IS WHAT YOU NEED DANIEL BECAUSE YOU AND MATT ARE THE SAME PERSON SOMETIMES.

“Will you stop that, Kyle?! I know you have manners somewhere in that thick skull of yours,” she yelled with an eye-roll. Biotch

“Sorry, Ma.”

MA.

“I don’t think screaming in his face that he’s a pain in the butt is the best way to go about turning him into an adult,” Daniel slipped into the conversation casually, twirling spaghetti around with his fork. Daniel's hot when he's standing up for the love of his life


“Thanks,” Daniel mumbled. Kyle’s smiley face was the last thing before he was alone in the bathroom. He still had ten minutes.

I get it. Subtle, and I get it

“There’re lots of things that you’re better at than me.”

DANIEL YOU LITTLE DOVE I LOVE YOU.

Kyle beamed and told him, “You’re the only one that thinks so.” AHHHH GOD I'M DYING CAUSE THE CUTE AND THE KILL ME.

Screw it, Daniel thought, then leaned in and planted one right on Kyle’s lips. YES. PLEASE. CONTINUE.

He closed his eyes as Kyle tugged his sweats down to his ankles. THANK YOU FOR CONTINUING.

He gently pushed him away and ran to rescue the only meal he knew how to make aside from microwave tacos. BURNING FOOD CAUSE THEY'RE MAKING OUT I LOVE THEM CAN I HOLD THEM PLEAZZZZZZZ

Daniel’s back hit the bed with a thud
GOOD THINGS HAPPENING HERE. GOOD THINGS.

He loved the way Daniel’s face burned red at the request. It's all of the good IT'S ALL OF THE FANTASTIC

“Touch me,”

“Huh?”

“Fucking touch me!”

FUCKING TOUCH HIM KYLE WHAT

Daniel was suffering. Suffering because he had no damn idea what was going on. To him, numerous hook-ups and sex isn’t just simple, emotionless messing around. Maybe it was a bit presumptuous of him to think that he’d get a relationship out of this, but he didn’t think it was an irrational concept either. It wasn’t just something that happened on the spur of the moment. They weren’t drunk. This was a sober weekend of kissing and sex.

WHAT ARE YOU DOING, THESE FEELINGS WHAT IS LIFE.

“There’s nothing to know,” Kyle said, turning to him, face like stone. “Nothing. Got it?”

Daniel slammed the door when he left.

YOU KNOW THOSE FEELINGS I WAS TALKING ABOUT? WELL HERE THEY ARE PLEASE WHAT....

No way in hell. Matt had turned his nose up at perfection. He wouldn’t go looking any lower.

Oh Daniel the lord be with you.

“Okay, twenty bucks that they’re back together in two weeks!”

“One and a half weeks, man. Daniel’s got the moves.”

DANIEL I'M SORRY THEY JUST DON'T KNOW YOU LIKE I DO.

Nevertheless, plan to win Matt back before Corey got to him was going pretty well. He felt like he’d gained a lot of ground.

Why do you make people wonderful and then you make them bags of dicks because THEY'RE REAL THAT'S WHY. THESE PEOPLE... ARE PEOPLE WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING TO ME.

You’re never around to have to deal with me. And it’s none of your business. You’ve made that clear.

Kyle didn’t respond.
This is me being dead because feelings.

Why? I'M ALREADY DEAD WHY DO YOU KEEP STABBING MY DEAD SELF WITH KNIVES OF FEELINGS WHY DO YOU DO THAT.

I need someone.

You don’t need anyone.

I'm making a weird screeching sound and I just want you to know.

“What’s going on?” Daniel asked her slowly. She threw her arms around him.

“My baby’s all grown up!”

Kyle didn’t look at Daniel when he and Jake drove away.
This is all the pain.

“I get it. I used to love him too, you know.” that is just the loveliest

“He who hesitates masturbates,” this is right up there with food sexual.

“Only for him.”

You are the bag of dicks BECAUSE YOU DO THIS TO ME WTF

“I’m just gonna go to bed,” Daniel muttered then vacated the dining room. His parents continued to argue as he climbed the stairs. It's alright Dan

Kyle came to the play. Daniel almost tripped over his own feet when he saw him standing next to their parents by the car.
You know that screeching sound? That is happening.

“Oh my god, is Daniel here? Because like, this is the third door I’ve tried and dudes, you just don’t even want to know what was going on in two of them,” I REMEMBER THIS AND IT WAS HILARIOUS AND IT STILL IS THE SECOND TIME I DON'T KNOW HOW BUT...

“Look, I like…really, really like you and I’m not going anywhere so you just have to go to college in California, got it?” Yep This is happening the second time too

Daniel closed his book then looked up as Kyle, dripping wet, walked over to him with his surfboard. srsly is all the hot though. I understand

“Shower for me then,” Kyle decided then started dealing with his board.

“Shower for us,” Daniel amended with a smirk and Kyle beamed at him. SHOWER FOR US IT WAS PERFECT YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND I WANT ALL OF IT OH MY GOD CAN I HUG YOU FOR THIS HAPPENING?

Oh wow :D It's been a while, and I completely forgot mibba existed! I literally watched all of Supernatural in the time...that's like...8 seasons with 20 episodes in each one! XD I no lifed that so bad.
I love this story, thanks for updating! :)

PLEASE< PLEASE< PLLLEEEAASSEEE UPDATE!!!. this story is Great!, I red all of the chapters in two days...heheh. UPDATE O_O

YES. SURROGATE IS THE RIGHT WAY TO DO IT. I love Dean, please include more Dean.

BleedingHearts:

I'm actually really curious as to how dean and Corey's dad met, they seem very different

this so hard dear lord. Back story would be 100% fantastic.
THEY'RE SEX FIENDS TOO
YOU KNOW HOW TO PLEASE YOUR READERS
Update already, I'm desperate to know how Corey's conversation with his father went

Yay, you updated! :)
I'm actually really curious as to how dean and Corey's dad met, they seem very different, I think they're gorgeous though :)
Can't wait for more!

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gaaah!! just amazing! simply amazing

Absolutely freaking amazing!!!!!

Sooooo good c: I loved the update! I hope this isn't the last update though c:

This was AMAZING. I cant wait for more!!!!

I am ignoring Helen's comment because principles

I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO DO WITH MYSELF BECAUSE UPDATE

(hot sauce and naked groin area really don’t mix).
Oh Mattie you dawg HOW IS THIS KID SO PERFECT.

“Calm down or people will think you’re a terrorist or something.”
Hehe but awww. Poor Corey bb.

I adjust my grip so our palms meet and his fingers soon curl around my hand.
SUCH AN ADORABLE GESTURE THEY ARE MADE OF SUNSHINE AND ADORABLE WHY.

And want to join the mile high club on the return trip.
Plane secks y/y? I NEED THIS IN MY LIFE ALICE DO YOU EVEN UNDERSTAND I CAN'T.

It’s just difficult trying to think about it without getting hard, considering all the hot, sticky and continuous sex we’re going to be having.
I squee-d out loud OMG. JUST OMG HOT.

This relationship has turned me into a sex fiend.
THIS WHOLE PARAGRAPH OK. NGF. PERFECTION WHAT AM I.

And, you know, this:
Embarrassingly, the amount of accidental parental blowjob walk-ins stands at five.
Why do I imagine Matt's mom sort of just standing there for a minute, smiling and nodding...?
YOU DID THIS TO ME

We have a whole damn summer together.
Hehehe I WISH YOU COULD SEE MY FACE RIGHT NOW EHEHE. Ermahgerd lots of Corey/Matt secks now please thanks.

“Should I try to distract you or something?”
OH MY GOD PLEASE DO

“Why don’t you just say I’m your friend until you’re ready to tell him? Not that you have to tell him, but yeah.”
HOW ADORABLE IS MATT AND HIS UNDERSTANDING-NESS?! HOW. THEY NEED TO MAKE GAY BABIES ASAP LIKE NOW.

“No. I want you to be happy about it. Your dad’s…complicated.”
MY BABY I'M CRYING BECAUSE YOU'RE PERFECT.

“You know, every day I am more and more grateful that you’re not one of those bitchy gay guys.”
EHEHE OH COREY. (He's totes the bitchy gay in this relationship )

I AM SO HAPPY ABOUT THIS TRIP ASDFGHJKL FIX THINGS WITH YOUR GAY DADDY COREY. FIX IT.

“I’m going to throw a tantrum now, just to keep you on your toes.” Corey jabs me in the side then leans his head on my shoulder and I smile in spite of myself.
I'M DONE. I CAN'T. How are they so beautifully perfectly BB's?!

“He’s supposed to be here. Five minutes ago.”
BEST LINE EVER OMG COREY YOU BB. YOU BB.

“You know, most people don’t intentionally get into traffic if they can help it.”
Matt is the level-headed cheese to Corey's biscuit LOOK AT THEM PLEASE HELP I CAN'T.

Corey grunts a response then turns away. Fortunately, my mom instilled reasonable manners in me a long time ago.
OH COREY. OH MATTIE. WHAT I SAID UP THERE OKAY. CHEESE AND BISCUITS.

“Of course it is,” Corey snaps. “Can we go already?”
Aw he's such a bb. SUCH A BB. (I'm terribly amused by this. TERRIBLY AMUSED)

“We only have the one spare bed. I didn’t think you’d mind sharing but we can always make up the couch.”

He opens the door and I hope he doesn’t catch my blush at his words.
You thinking what I'm thinking?

I probably smell like the inside of a hooker’s handbag.
Yep. So. Gay, y'all.

“I would’ve chickened out at the airport if you hadn’t come with me,” he murmurs before kissing my neck lightly.
AND THE GESTURES CONTINUE. I'M TINGLING ALICE. FEELS ALL OVER THE PLACE. EVERYWHERE.

“I’m trying to be all sentimental and shit. Don’t ruin it.”

“Sorry, Romeo.”
JUST GET FUCKING MARRIED ALREADY OKAY.

Corey is my fucking sun when he’s kissing me and I feel like a gawky Earth just fortunate enough to be caught in his orbit.
What is this metaphor MY HEART CAN'T.

“I love you,” he breathes, piercing blue eyes staring down at me like I’m his favourite person in the whole world. And it makes me incandescently happy to think that I probably am.
Aaaaand FLAIL. My beautiful, beautiful, perfect boys

“For the first time ever…I’m good. Please don’t.”
God knows that that just killed Matt. God knows.

“That’s different and you know it is. I’m not putting out just because you need a distraction or whatever. Plus, you ruined the moment.”
AWWW OUCH MATT WHY YOU GOTTA BURN LIKE THAT COREY JUST WANTS THE SECKSY TIMES WITH YOUR BODY.

“And I’m really tired so can we just spoon or something?”
Lets spoon Alice

God, he looks so much like Corey it’s making me nervous.
Oh my god that brought on such inappropro thoughts I won't share OH GOD.

probably a little too close for someone pretending we’re just friends.
MY EXPRESSION. YOU WANT TO SEE MY EXPRESSION I SWEAR

“Matt is my boyfriend,” he announces and links his fingers through mine.
OH MY GOD ASDFGHJKL OH. MY. GOD. PERFECT. MY BODY IS YOURS NOW ALICE.

“There must be something in my juice. Two gay kids huh?”
Totes inappropro Simon

“I’m not totally sure about that. I like Matt and only Matt, to be perfectly honest.”
You like dick, Corey. Get over it

Simon sighs and picks the still sleeping baby out of the stroller. She’s maybe a year old, at the most, and he cradles her like she’s the most precious thing in the world. All of a sudden I’m angry. Corey looks like all his feelings are caught in his throat.
MY POOR BB. MY POOR BB's. OH LORD WHAT IS HAPPENING. WHAT IS THIS HURT.

“What, so there’s actually a way broccoli can get worse?” I roll my eyes.
Oh honey

Fortunately, the pretty cashier with the glasses and piercings on her face is now looking away, smiling to herself.
Me too, cashier. They make me happy too

“I’m his boyfriend actually,” I say and Dean shakes his head, smiling.

“I knew it! Simon didn’t believe me when I said to him ‘you know what that boy needs? A good man’ and here you are. And they’re actually talking.”
They're about as subtle as a fucking train wreck

Fortunately, this is the opposite of a problem considering my inner food-sexual.
I've been waiting for this ALWAYS GO BACK TO YOUR TRUE SELF MATTIE

CUE THE GOOSEBERRY LUBE SITUATION
“Ready, Matt?” he whispers. I reach back and grab his dick.
WHAT IS THIS Oh my god I CAN'T.

His hand feels fucking amazing wrapped around my dick and I wonder if I’ll ever get sick of this. The prospect is impossible.
HOT HOT HOT.

“I had something better,” he tells me with a straight-face, then jumps back on the bed and throws and arm across my chest.

“I’m better than anything you’ll ever have.” He kisses my forehead.

“I know, Matt. Believe me, I know.”
CRYING BECAUSE PERFECTION ASDFGHJKL HOW ARE THEY SO BEAUTIFUL ALICE PLEASE HELP I DON'T EVEN KNOW MY BRAIN = DEAD.

He holds my hand and all I can think about is how many tourist spots I want to kiss him on tomorrow.
THIS IS JUST MY FAVOURITE

MORE ALICE. MORE MORE MORE.

OH. MY. GOD.

HERE WE GO BITCHES.
though that time I was stoned and tried making Mexican cuts it close (hot sauce and naked groin area really don’t mix).
YOU'RE REALLY BACK. THAT'S SO MATTHEW. GOOD GOD.

“Calm down or people will think you’re a terrorist or something.”
YOU SAID TERRORIST ON A PLANE?!?!?! You got balls.
Matthew. Respect.

Two months in and it still amazes me that this is happening – an actual semi-functional relationship with Corey.

It still amazes me.

Going to the home of the space needle, which I’ve wanted to see since my thirteen-year-old obsession with nineties’ Seattle grunge. And want to join the mile high club on the return trip.
That's pretty much it. Yeah.

THIS IS GOING TO BE THE LONGEST COMMENT EVER OKAY? Okay.

stop my son from doing something stupid like stabbing his dad in the eye.
Matt could totally do that. HUG HIM MATTHEW. GO TO HIM.

It’s just difficult trying to think about it without getting hard, considering all the hot, sticky and continuous sex we’re going to be having.

Embarrassingly, the amount of accidental parental blowjob walk-ins stands at five, but needless to say, we are completely undeterred.
You dogs.

“You know, every day I am more and more grateful that you’re not one of those bitchy gay guys.”
Patrick.

“He’ll probably want you to sit in the back,” he mumbles – like Corey does when he’s all dejected – and I feel like I want to give him a hug,
YES HUGS. OLDER COREY=SO MUCH HOT YES PLEASE.

I probably smell like the inside of a hooker’s handbag.

“I’m trying to be all sentimental and shit. Don’t ruin it.” Corey you are my love.

Corey is my fucking sun when he’s kissing me and I feel like a gawky Earth just fortunate enough to be caught in his orbit. That's so beautiful in a failboat kinda way

“There must be something in my juice. Two gay kids huh?” I WANNA CRY

But I know that the reason my hand is now purple is the little girl asleep in the stroller.
SHIT JUST GOT REAL. SHIT JUST GOT REAL.

“This is Millie, your sister,” Simon says carefully you bag of dicks YOU BAG OF DICKS

Two hugs in two days…this is weird for us.
YES. YES ALL THE HUGS YES.

“So was work okay?” I ask him. He passes me the salt. Matthew you fucking domestic goddess I want to kiss your face.

“I knew it! Simon didn’t believe me when I said to him ‘you know what that boy needs? A good man’ and here you are. And they’re actually talking.” I TOTES GET IT DEAN. OUR GAYDARS OUR GAYDARS

this is the opposite of a problem considering my inner food-sexual. I want a man to get food sexual with

“Likewise,” Bitches be gettin down to business

Not quoting secks because class but HAWT BB.

“I know, Matt. Believe me, I know.” Oh

He holds my hand and all I can think about is how many tourist spots I want to kiss him on tomorrow.
There are a lot of tourist spots to make out at Corey. A LOT OF TOURIST SPOTS

GETTING EROTIC ON THE TOUR DUCK.

BB I'M SO GLAD YOU UPDATED MY LIFE IS SO COMPLETE OKAY? IT'S SOO COMPLETE.

BTW UPDATE SOON OR

ELSE

WAHHHHH I HAVE MISSED THIS STORY SO MUCH :')
so glad corey and simon have kinda patched things up now
and matt has to stop being a horn dog seriously

(hehe dean sounds mighty attractive!!!!!!!!)