Hey :D New Reader... - I just wanted to give your story a comment. I love it so far. Its different from other stories i've read. I love how Gerard just have no clue at all. Please keep the updates coming :)
Okay, I was subscribed to this story, but I un subscribed to a lot because it was getting hard to keep up with all the story lines, but I just read the chapters I’ve not read since I was not subscribed, and I love it. So im subscribing again. Haha. Anyway, I love this story; it’s a really good idea. And I was one clever chicken and worked out Linda was Franks mum in like, chapter two when Linda was introduced. 8-|
dude =] new reader. this story is b-tchin. tbh, i worked out linda is frank's mom in chapter 7 (and even if there hadn't been all the huge clues, she's called linda. tha'ts kind of enough, not that i['m dissing the story or anything, far from it, but it was pretty obvious =]) you said you like con-crit, well it's not so much about the story as the spelling. you keep using the wrong spelling of your. the correct way when referring to someone being something is to use you're. you use your in stead of you're sometimes. for example, you might put, "your awesome" when it's "you are awesome" which should be shortened to "you're awesome". you just need to remember where to use you're instead of your. x♥x
ah dude, page claim! i name this page... Halloween because halloween is a pretty word.