If I Knew Who You Were - Comments

Eeeeeee!
Yay for dates!
:D
And,this does not suck,Becca!
<3x~[[I wAnTxTo FaLl]]~x</3

Cute<3

I absolutely love this story.

So original and amazing. :cute:

More when you can?

**Subscribes**

Paramore!
21 days!
*spazz*
=P
That chapter made me 'aw' so much!
I love Gerard this fic!
=]]
<3x~[[I wAnTxTo FaLl]]~x</3

Godd update :D I like ^^

-shoot-
So much drama and suspense =o
You rock... ^_^

Aw,Gerard was being so kewt about calling him!
^.^
Do update again soon!
=]
<3x~[[I wAnTxTo FaLl]]~x</3

yes! they finally met.
I loved it.
keep going!

xoox

This has potential :) Do continue :O

Woop woop!
Hehe,I loved the bit where Frank was jumping up and down in front of Gerard and...y'know....
=P
<3x~[[I wAnTxTo FaLl]]~x</3

Eeeeeeeeee!
I luuuuurrvee this,Becca!
You've gotta update!
<3x~[[I wAnTxTo FaLl]]~x</3

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! U-P-D-A-T-E!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Woo! I like this story, it sounds good so far and it sounds original :)

I wonder what the candles are for...

-subscribes- Update soon?
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Yayayayay.

Partyyy =]]

Ehehe.
I wonder what the candles are for?
^_^

Oh yeah, Becca.

AIDEN TONIGHT!!
*Heart attack*

Okay, so first things first you need a spell check. If you don't have on on your computer then Mibba had a spell check on the top left hand corner. I read the first two paragraphs and couldn't continue. If you don't have spell check, then re-read it. I know that you would hate to re-read something you have just written, but you can write it one day and then re-read it the next day, then post it. I just saw stupid spelling errors, thats all.

Other then that the first two paragraphs were good. Oh and, work on descriptions. They aren't wonderful, but they are good.

So fix it up and them PM me so I can tell you what I think of your writing.

Thank You.

-Ms.Murder

*punches fist into the air*
BOO YAH Frerard <3

I took a break from homework to find that you had another story - so I had to come check it out ^_^

This sounds like it's going to be amazing, it's original too which is always a big plus in my books =D

Cannot wait for more!
Beth
xoxo

aww! 4 year old Gerard is adorable!
please continue. I like it.
xoox

OMG!
CONTIUE, CONTINUE, CONTINUE!!
As you probably guessed I love this story already!
*subcribes*

Oh I wonder who that could be.
x]

Yes.
Continue
*Jumps around waiting for next chapter*