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I... You... Uh...
NO WORDS CAN DESCRIBE HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS STORY!
It's so good. I love the sweet yet heartbreaking part in chapter 9. I love Rhys and want to hug him and tell him that its gonna be okay in the end.

aw this last chapter was so cute. :3

gahhh the 8th chapter really gives me feels it reminds so much of this boy i know lol he's like my own celeste and this is kind of irrelevant to the story but i still like i just i can't ok i can't there are no words it's so good it's unreal

?!?!??????! (i'm going insane)

This is just so beautiful! I could not stop reading. Celeste is such a troubled/complex character. I probably wouldn't stick around as long as him, she'd drive me crazy! But she's fascinating. Your writing is gorgeous and this story is flawless :D

so perf.

Fucking brilliant.

"she'll deny all of this in the morning" THIS STORY IS GREAT

"You should buy some new sheets while you’re at it, lover boy." why do i love this line so much (i'm only on chapter two obviously) but i felt like commenting already just because this story is already so interesting and the endearment 'lover boy' is degrading almost and i'm so curious to see how her character is going to progress.

this is so perfect in every single way possible

AHHH OH MY GOD THAT IS SO SAD.
Rhys is so sweet to her, but she's so terrible to him.
WHAT IS WRONG WITH HER.

YOU UPDATE LIKE MAD
It's not a bad thing, but damn woman.

I like this story a lot. And I really love Rhys. Like really really really really love Rhys.

:)

I'm going to bed now and I'm gonna miss updates 'cause I'm working all day later

Amazing, amazing updates. I look forward to chapter eight and more!

She really doesn't want to admit she's in love with him, does she?

da fuq.
Celeste scares the fucking shit out of me, but this story's just... wow. I can't. wow.
THIS IS GORGEOUS.

i've already left you like 3 comments and it's only been 5 minutes but i just wanted to say i'm absolutely in love with this part

"I was with Ulysses," she answers flatly, staring at me. "We popped some xannies and partied for a day and messed around for the next. I fell asleep and he wasn't there when I woke up. Was that what you wanted to hear?" I look at her sadly and she rolls her eyes. "Don't look at me like that."

"Why did you come back?"

"You know why."

you're brilliant (!!!!!!??)

also i love the theme ♡♡♡ lana rules

yeah definitely in love with this and i don't know him well yet but i'm pretty sure Rhys is my dream boy ♡♡

Just, wow.
This story is just beautiful and perfect and kind of cuntish.
I'm in love.

OKAY BEE
SERIOUSLY
WHY DO YOU WRITE THE MOST AMAZING STORIES?
I swear, every time I log on here you have something new up and of course, I have to read it and I fall in love.
This is very wonderful, though.

CELESTE JUST LOVE RHYS ALREADY HE DESERVES IT
If she doesn't, then I'm sure there's plenty of other girls ((((aka me)))) that will.

So, um, do that thing you do best and update, por favor. :D

I am subscribed! This is amazing! Celeste creeps me out, not gonna lie, but I like Rhys already. He's cute and the romantic type, while Celeste is the hard bitch haha.

Update soon! :)