Gentle Heart - Comments

@ Jayme112234
It is sad and it's the whole point. She's one of the reasons why Talen left Asgard in the first place. If she had a more stable family she probably wouldn't have left.

@ teenagedream91
I know but it's still sad to see her mother treat her like that.

@ Jayme112234
It shouldn't be that much of a surprise to to the reputation her mother had before this all happened.

Can't believe that Talen's mother did that to her own daughter... I really hope that Talen copes well with her imprisonment xxx

@ Dezi Demize
No, she's not a mother. She bore Talen, but nothing else. Vermundr has been the family she has relied on until his passing. Her father was a distant figure and is recurring in her life now that she is in prison. He tries as best as he can and being his only daughter who is gentle he doesn't know how to approach things sometimes.

haha me too. I would have regretted it if I killed off Jane XD Can be with all that denial juice he must be sippin' haha

@ teenagedream91
Minerva doesn't even the title of "mother"....she's nothing but a bully! Talen deserves better than that! At least she still has her father :)

I'm so glad you didn't kill Jane off, because I rather enjoy the Love Triangle with Talen, Thor, and Jane! ;)

And it's quite possible! lol XD

@ Dezi Demize
Minerva is indeed a bitch. Not going to defend her lol she's always been that way given to the flashbacks I wrote about her. I was close to killing Jane off but where's the fun in doing that? Half of my creativity will have gone down the gutter. Thor is being a man!!! Possibly because he's in denial per say hmmm?

@ AcidStamps
Haha thor is like a pancake. I love your analogies. Minerva is old school when it comes to her family. Talen is different making her useless and an embarrassment. She wanted her daughter to rise above her natural station as a healer and become a warrior like the rest on the family. Despising the fact of what her title is it's icing on the cake when she teamed up with Loki.

I only have a few things to say: Talen's mother is a bitch, I'm glad Jane will be okay, and...IT'S ABOUT TIME YOU GREW UP THOR!!!! I loved this chapter and I'm very anxious to see what happens next!! ♥

Thor just needs to make up his mind. He's so flip floppity like a pancake. It's just irritating. And TaIen's mom, excuse my french, needs a good dicking. She's so uptight and low down.

@ Dezi Demize
Exactly! People mistaken her to have a weak heart in all honesty she's the most loyal and Odin still believes in her. Odin and a few others are the only ones that are able to see what kind of goddess she really is. She doesn't fight back, she accepts it like when S.H.I.E.L.D. wanted to take her in she went and yes I already finished the next chapter. Filled with first time real appearances by some and a little Thor and Talen.

@ teenagedream91
I seriously can't wait to see what happens next! Thor really needs to grow up and make up his mind about Talen. I also reread some of the chapters and I have to say that Talen is actually a lot stronger than people think. She's been loyal to Thor and the rest of the gods since the beginning, despite their harsh words. Plus she also willingly accepted her punishment without protest because she realized what she has done. I just hope it all works out for her in the end <3

@ AcidStamps
haha. Ah never had someone call Thor a pussy before and it just tickles me. The next chapter will be up soon. You are my fifth commenter so expect it later on tonight or tomorrow :)

Poor Talen ): Thor is totally being a pussy towards Talen, first he's all I'll protect you at all cost, then he's all rot in prison. It wasn't all her. I mean she did it but, come on! Give her a break.

@ Jayme112234
A century isn't a long time in asgardian terms but I guess for us it's like a life time sentence plus a few. She won't stay there forever but it might feel like t to her since she's not used to being in Asgard

@ lovelessbird
You'll find out in the next chapter.

Poor Talen... I truly hope that she doesn't have to stay there forever xxx

I'm nervous to find out what goes on while talen is in the cellar

@ Dezi Demize
Totally, Thor is being hot and cold with her the first in the story. He's conflicted with her critically hurting Jane to destroying half of Asgard along with Loki and the Zarroc. This all adds up since I am going to go into Thor 2 now, loosely based since I don't know the movie by heart lol. Loki is imprisoned or going to be. They tried to be fair given to what she has done and by law she is sentence to prison or death, she was given a lighter sentence. You will see important characters giving her a visit in the next chapter and how she deals with being imprisoned for so long.

@ mollymurach
Thank you. I put a lot of work in this story more than i have ever done since this is out of my comfort zone.