Comment swap brought me here. I love love love Harry Potter fanfiction and after writing it for a few years myself I always like stumbling across one with great promise! You are extremely detailed and paint the picture in the readers mind as the story goes. By adding Ivy's sketch at the end you make the character ever more real with is always something I try to do myself! :) GREAT, FANTASTIC work and keep it up!
June 3rd, 2014 at 03:37am