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  • Bugalouie

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    God Eric, you so dumb. God Kai, you need to beat the shiz out of Mike with something....God Mike...I can't even describe my feelings toward you! I love this story. One of the better Eric Staal stories I've read!
    July 25th, 2012 at 12:23am
  • Penguins11

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    I loved this chapter! And for the record, Jordan could talk like that and I would still kiss those lips ;) I literally jumped up and down when I started reading through Kai and his' conversation about that!

    I feel awful for Eric though, it's got to be hard enough for him trying to deal with his feelings for her and getting himself straightened out without Kai not talking to him... they need an intervention!

    And WOOHOO! BABY STAAL IN THE BIG LEAGUES! :) Also made my day! This whole chapter was just a big ray of sunshine!! :) Absolutely LOVED it and I can't wait for more!!

    And thanks for the dedication :) You're awesome too!!
    July 23rd, 2012 at 08:22pm
  • Capt. Morgan

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    Poor Kai... hangovers suck from what I hear... :-( Oh dear... cat's out of the bag now... Busted by the little brother...Poor Eric... he is so confused. Coach Kirk makes me smile... :-) YAY JARED!!!!!! I <3 him!! :-) IDK how I feel about changing the lines but I'm glad he is gettting his chance. :-) Oh and Jordan's girlfriend is in fact amazing. :-) I like the chapter... didn't see it coming... well kinda did but yeah...lol... :-D <3
    July 23rd, 2012 at 05:46am
  • Penguins11

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    OH MY GOD!

    Smooth Eric, smooth... he definitely needs to work on his aim a little bit... might have had a different effect on her!

    And I absolutely LOVED the Staals altogether like that! (Well you know my weakness for them anyways) but I really liked the way Jordan, Marc and Jared have kind of taken Kai in because of how close she is with Eric, as well as the fact that they all stood up to Mike for her without even a second thought. Definitely some good ol' Staal intimidation factor going on there, and not to mention THE most badd-ass interruption by the one and only Mario; that definitely made this whole chapter! Especially her reaction - the little salute and being a bit of a smart ass in response to him.

    Absolutely loved it!! :)
    July 18th, 2012 at 09:09pm
  • Capt. Morgan

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    I can't believe Emily won! Wth? Lol. :-) Eric! Eyes to yourself!! Lol. I <3 the Staals as you know. Skinner!!!!! Her comments about getting trashed and wasted amuse me. :-) Finally! I'm here! And I feel like such a bitch. :-( Sorry.... ok not really.... that was f-ing funny. :-) Poor Sidney and Kai.... I mean I would totally take Kai's place.... I mean what? Cough... Lol. F-ing Mike.... asshat. Je n'aime pas.... Yay Staals to the rescue!! Mario is such a freaking B.A... He is wonderful. "Mario kissed her on the forehead much like a father would to his daughter and told her, “It’s my pleasure Kailyn. Do not let him ruin your night. You go have fun, okay?”

    She grinned and saluted him, “Yes sir!”

    Mario smiled and nodded before leaving. Kailyn turned to the group assembled around her and informed them, “I am going to get hammered now, excuse me.”" that whole part was wonderful. :-) Aww first kiss!! Well almost! :-D Can't wait for an update. Loved this chapter!
    July 18th, 2012 at 05:32am
  • Bugalouie

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    Awh por Kai for being confused, having her Ex show up at her birthday party and being rendered speechless by Eric Staal kisses(;
    July 18th, 2012 at 05:15am
  • Bugalouie

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    Oh god i love this.
    July 14th, 2012 at 05:31am
  • Capt. Morgan

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    Biffle.... haha. I love how Eric and Kai cook each other breakfast. :-) I'm glad that the Huricanes seem to really accept Kai and that they have her back. And I agree that Eric needs a woman... and I think her name starts with a K and ends in an ailyn.... :-) I love how the farm team is so smitten by her. :-) Jared is perfect. I love Marc... Just cuz he's Marc. :-) KANER!!!!! :-) He is wonderful. Nick!! I love him too.... it stinks that they can't be friends at the moment but I understand it. Oh and it makes me very sad that the Capitals are such shit heads in this story. :-( I'm going to pretend that there were only a few that were asshats and the others just weren't as vocal... But I like it. :-) <3
    July 13th, 2012 at 06:56am
  • Penguins11

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    LOVED IT!!

    What can I say - a story with good writing and a good plot that includes the Staal brothers will always have a place in my heart, but DAMN you are doing a good job! :)

    I'm kind of heartbroken over the whole Nick thing - I mean, I love him for doing what's right for her but I hate him for doing it at the same time. And I think Eric's falling pretty hard, whether he's admitted it to himself or not, lol.

    Great job! Can't wait to see what's next!
    July 13th, 2012 at 06:54am
  • Penguins11

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    Absolutely love this story so far!! Eric seems like the perfect man in this story - and this strong, encouraging side definitely suits him! Can't wait for more!
    July 12th, 2012 at 11:06pm
  • Capt. Morgan

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    Oh Kenny....smh. Lol. :-)

    So I love this chapter. I love how well Eric deals with Kai. I'm glad that Kai is begining to let Capt. Huricane in. Eric is really sweet. And whenever I picture Jeff now I see a big shaggy dog.... its kinda cute. lol. :-) <3
    July 11th, 2012 at 07:27pm
  • KimberleyNicole

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    I love it already :) can't wait for more!!!
    July 10th, 2012 at 06:29pm
  • Samanthajade

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    I love it already (: keep up the great writing
    July 9th, 2012 at 11:59pm
  • Capt. Morgan

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    Hahaha....oh Zach.... love it!!!! :-)I can't wait for more!! You would use the cover pic that you did.... it made me laugh. I love the layout. Good job!!!! :-) <3
    July 9th, 2012 at 04:11am