I was brought here by comment swap, and while I must admit I'm not really in to mermaids, you do have an excellent writing style. Your use of words is varied and you're very descriptive, as well. Just watch that you're putting each line of dialogue on a separate line if it's said by someone else. You're idea is very original and I hope you continue with it.
September 4th, 2012 at 04:10pm