Maid of the Wave - Comments

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This is a really cool story! I like this a lot. It's unique and has an excellent flow. Like, I'm subscribing that's how much I like it. The only thing is, it's a little difficult to read with the way the layout is set up but that's alright, I can manage.

Keep writing! (:

This is a really good story! So far I've only read up to chapter 5, but I really like it! You've put a very interesting twist on mermaids, I like how the tail determines what they do. Try and put spaces between every paragraph, it makes it easier to read. All in all, great story so far! I'm definitely subscribing :)

So immediately from the summary I was intrigued. This is such an interesting concept for a story. So far I've only read the first chapter because I honestly want to savour every single second of reading this. This is simply one of the most interesting things I've ever seen and I'm really looking forward to reading more of it.

This is a really interesting idea! I haven't read a mermaid story yet, so this is really intriguing! What a great idea. The plot, so far, is very interesting. I can't wait to see what happens!

This is really interesting. You've made up an interesting society here, and I always appreciate that in fantasy. Your characters are interesting too. And you don't have a lot of spelling and grammar issues that I noticed. Good job.

I love it! I stopped halfway through the first chapter just to tell you that! I'm subscribing, and just a little piece of advice: When your going to start a new paragraph, hit "enter" twice. It makes your writing look a little bit more precise. :D

I really love this mermaind story and I think it's a great idea.... yeah... mibba keeps brining me here.... I think it's because your writing is so amazing. I totally agree with the comment below me and I haven't read a mermaid story other than yours. There are a little bit of typos yes... but still the story IS Amazing. Every time mibba sends me here I'm going to keep commenting and read it every single time... yes your story is that good.

This is wonderful! I don't think I've ever read a mermaid story on mibba before! And because of this story, I wish there was more! :) there was some grammar error and typos, but nothing a quick read through cant fix! I've subscribed so please please update, and keep up the great work!

This is very interesting. I've never read anything like it before, and that's a good change. This is really well written and I feel like I'm actually there. It is very enticing and interesting; I can't wait to read more of it. I absolutely love the background/layout. It works really well with the story, and adds a great ambiance to the rest of it.

I like your story. It's very interesting and my kind of genre that I like to read. But I never really read one about mermaids and to be honest I really like this one. It's really good and i really like the trio Naomi, Heidi, and Claire. I'm curious as to why the merfolks are so harsh on her. She seems nice and just wants to be accepted. I think having a purple tale is pretty cool. It's also one of my favorite colors. I always wanted to be a mermaid when i was younger. lol I sit in the and pretend to be one. i wanna know what happen he tells her he doesn't know where he is going.

I like this story. Mermaids, an interesting change from the typical fantasy stories that seem to be floating around these days. I like at the beginning how you explain the normalcy of their lives and how they love their children, all except for Claire. I also like how you explain what happened to the king and then swiftly but gracefully switch back to talking about Claire. This story is easy to read and nicely crafted. The background itself is very nice and goes along with the story well.

Honestly, I've never read anything remotely like this story, but I love it! I don't know what I was expecting, but it was nothing like this. This is very well written and it really draws me in. Great job!
The only suggestion I have is to change your layout, because when the image of the mermaid is in the background, it's really difficult to read the text. Other than that, it's a great story. :)

Hello.... I'm commenting again because this is where the comment swap braught me again. So i'm just going to talk about HOw much I love this because your writing iS SO totally aqsomE!!! YEs... I think this is 200 characters to comMENT on so I guess I'll be on my way.

@LilBiskette

Oh! Thank you so much! That means a lot! Especially that you've read it at it's original source! I am so unbelievably flattered! It put a smile on my face.

:3 I'm very happy to have pleased you, I'll do my best to keep you happy with this.

I actually read that on DeviantArt!!!!!! And I loved it soooooo mUch. It's a really good story but I would lie to hear more. I love you layout but it is still a tiny biT PLain. Other than that everything else is great! I'm so syked that I'm the first one to comment on your story. Please post MORE stuff on Deviantart!!