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I, to be honest, absolutely hate One Direction, but I absolutely love the story. The way you built Sammy's background just amazed me. I loved coming across a character with the same name as me. I have only read the first chapter so far but it surprisingly hooked me from the start. This is so much better than most One Direction Fan Fictions I have read. I will definitely keep reading later! :)

This story hooked me from the beginning. You have a very unique way of writing. You have the ability to intrigue your reader to continue reading, which if you didn't already know, is quite a hard task. Good job, and good luck with your further writing career :)

This story hooked me from the beginning. You have a very unique way of writing. You have the ability to intrigue your reader to continue reading, which if you didn't already know, is quite a hard task. Good job, and good luck with your further writing career :)

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Firstly, I don't normally read One Direction fanfictions, but this was nice. I'll give you props for spending so much time on Sam's background story and just over all giving her a basis for her character. I've only read the first nine chapters, but I'm really interested to see were this story goes. Also, your layout goes well with the story without making it...predictable? I don't know, every time I spot a 1D fan-fic I expect pictures of the boys plastered all over. But it's a good thing, in my book, that you didn't. It makes your story appear original. Anyway, this is very nice and I hope you continue to wright more stuff :3

gah its been 4 months you should update. I miss it.

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I didn't read anything of your story, because I wouldn't be a front runner for a One Direction concert, but I have nothing against the guys that make up One Direction. It seems that the people that have read it do like it so I will encourage you to continue your story so they can continue to enjoy it.

Wow, I honestly did not think that I would be reading a one direction fanfiction. I like how you use an abundant amount of description. Unlike most stories that just explain a few things with their dialogue. It was slightly hard to remember the names, and who they were but I caught on. Nice work.

I really liked this actually and I'm not even that big of a 1D fan. I liked it so much I subscribed! The beginning was sad :c I can't believe how she went through all of that with the Mr. Gifford. I like the plot, and I can't wait to read more!

I really like this story a lot!

I really like this story and freaked out when I saw the layout :) lol Update soon please?? :)

I love this so far! This is sooo good!
I can't wait for more. Update soon?:D

Oh yeah also I really want to see how her relationship with the new family will grow.

So please update soon! :D

I'm going to be honest I do not listen to 1D or even come close to being a fan.
But I really like your plot, Liam's and Sam's relationship its adorable.
Cant wait to read more :)

I so happy that comment swap sent me here because I am in love with this story now!
I love how you've written everything so far, and cannot wait to see where you take it :) x
And I love the Sammy and Liam interactions, because they're just way too sweet and make me wish I had a twin haha

Just saw this and thanks for updating. It was really good!

Comment Swap sent me here! I gotta say, i was very sad at the beginning. D: but I thought that this was a great story, and well written. Good luck with this story! I liked how you made young Liam, it was cute. :] <3

not from comment swap but I absolutely love this story please update soon!

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I`m not going to lie, I was seriously hurting for Sam with the whole thing with the newspaper guy! I can`t believe that she put up with that for that long without telling anyone! I couldn`t even imagine being in her shoes :`(
You have a very interesting concept here. It kind of confused me when you jumped from third person to first (though you did warn that in your author`s comments on the previous chapter). Also, just pointing something out, that in your summary, you are speaking third person and then have a first person line in there. Might wanna fix that.
I absolutely hated the suitcase guy (what a jerk!) and totally love Alex so far! <3
Not a crazy 1D fan, but you have a very interesting story started here and I wish you the best of luck on it!

I like One Direction, though not overly, but I don't tend to read 1D fanfictions. However, the idea behind your story was very original so that's always a plus. There were a few grammatical and word errors, but every story has those, so don't worry (: It doesn't change the fact that you've got real talent. Your layout makes it a bit hard on the eyes though, and the background image isn't really relevant to the story. I'd suggest proofreading before you post to catch those tiny mistakes.

I like what I read though, and you should definitely keep writing this story (:
Good luck!

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Not a huge One Direction fan, but I thought your story was pretty good. It was well written and there wasn't any major gramatical mistakes. A few, but nothing major :) I agree with one of the comments below with the ages. That kind of threw me off a bit. Anyway, keep writing :)