World Traveler - Comments

Although I don't read so much of regular stories I have got say that I found your story really good. I thought it was really well written and I can see that you've put a lot of effort into it. I'm deffinetely giving this a chance and hopefully you update soon :D

aww, The whole chapter was adorable. of course when you mentioned Mr. Gifford being a sex offender, it wasn't too cute. It was quite the surprise. I really enjoyed this chapter. Makes me want to read some more of it. :)

Same as the other commenters - I was thinking it was a really sweet story, with Sammy and Liam and then you just threw in that cliffhanger shocker at the end...I can see this story has the potential to be new and different, and I will definitely keep on reading to see what happens

Wow I was not expecting the ending!! Cliffhanger!! It got me thinking what is going to happen next. But I like your style of writing. There were a couple of grammar mistakes. Especially at the end, the grammar mistakes kinda confused me. Besides that the plot and everything is great!:)

Wow! I was not expecting that!!!:0 But I like your style of writing. There were a couple of grammar mistakes but it's okay. This story has so much suspense its amazing!:)

Aw, I thought this was so cute... Until the end. But holy cow, was it a surprise! I really enjoyed your writting, though I spotted a few grammar mistakes. The idea is original, and I think it has real potential, whether the outcome of the story is good or bad. I loved the beginning, with the tooth thing. I remember doing that to my siblings, lol. But overall, great story, good writing, and nice use of suspense. Good luck in the rest of the story!