I love this story so far. In fact, the only problem I have with it is that there are a few typos. But no matter. Ivy is wonderfully written, the stifled princess behind stone walls. I've also seen some anachronisms (running water, concrete and the like) but I'm not sure if these are on purpose or not. Still, the story does have a charm to it, and while I've read a lot of stories very similar, yours has a bit of originality to it. I like it.
September 15th, 2015 at 02:37am