I like Jessica, she's feisty and sounds like a tough chick. I love how she hates Sid and that Geno has to get his captain drunk, Geno is like a big cuddly Russian teddy bear I can't wait to see more
I'm enjoying it so far. I like that she's "not interested", it'll make things more fun. I like how you address how everyone that's not a pens fan views Crosby. Honestly, as a Flyers fan, it's pretty accurate. My rational side knows there's more to the story though and it's exciting to get to imagine it. Keep up the good writing!