Hate You Forever - Comments

  • Crosby'sBabyGirl

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    Ahhh a kiss. Can't wait to see what happens next!!
    August 14th, 2012 at 07:17pm
  • Crosby'sBabyGirl

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    Ahhh a kiss. Can't wait to see what happens next!!
    August 14th, 2012 at 07:17pm
  • Marinesister92

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    I felt like this was going way too back and forth between the two of them. one minute they hate each other and the next they're making oogly eyes. So i'm torn on that aspect.
    But i kept reading because it was so interesting to see them both come back after every insult they gave each other. I really can't wait to see how they keep doing that.

    I think some of the things that are going on can get cleaned up and make things clearer. Like the whole formally introduction thing, i was like "Whaaa?" until i realized you were referring to them knowing each other previously but would pretend to not know each other unless introduced. The omniscient point of view is fine but sometimes the fact that the thoughts of the other people are just thrown in there gets me confused like we magically jumped from Jess to Sid to her brother to stammer. Just a thought.
    Other wise i really like it.
    -S
    August 14th, 2012 at 06:34pm
  • rehbein

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    "Time to make him work for it." I love it!
    August 14th, 2012 at 03:17am
  • RebaXBroda

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    Finally a real kiss:D I love their tension!! I can't wait for more:))
    August 13th, 2012 at 10:48pm
  • soupy

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    Those love-hate tug-o-wars...or should I say hate-love?!!

    Jess has definitely crossed ever so carefully over to the Crosside - I think she is finally seeing more of Sid and less of the media hype. Although I am sure that kiss did a lot to sway her opinion of him. But I do like that she is not totally giving in at this point - gottta make a guy work for it!

    I have a feeling Sid is going to have all he can handle in Jess - she certainly isnt a wallflower nor is she like the "date appropriate" girls that Sid has been set up with along the way. Jess has a mind of her own!

    But the most adorable is Geno - far too cute for words!! "Girls Love"!!
    August 13th, 2012 at 07:05pm
  • hockeychick37

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    she so liked the kiss...haha...update soon!!!
    August 8th, 2012 at 02:19am
  • RebaXBroda

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    lol! I can't wait for another chapter, so much interesting stuff is happening! Update soon please:))
    August 7th, 2012 at 03:21am
  • Emily Lane

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    O: Eric knocking into Crosby some during a game? Now that is something I would love to read!
    August 7th, 2012 at 12:01am
  • C-u-on-the-Flipside

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    Last chapter it seemed they took a few steps forward but now they seem to have taken a few steps back with this chapter. The fact that they are so hot and cold makes for an interesting story. Can't wait to see where you go next!
    August 6th, 2012 at 10:56pm
  • soupy

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    Wow is there ever some smoke between Sid and Jess - and where there is smoke...

    I know that Jess keeps saying how much she hates Sid, but I think she doth protest too much!! And Eric seems to know how to call her on her shit.

    But will Jess ever truly admit her feelings - but I guess she has to fully admit them to herself first!!!
    August 6th, 2012 at 09:50pm
  • Ladyfiaran

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    Wow, Jessica is pissed Mr. Green I love how she accepted Geno's offer if he was still in the KHL, I can imagine him being happy about that. And I hope she really doesn't get Eric to kill Sid Cool
    August 6th, 2012 at 06:22pm
  • rehbein

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    I have drunkenly sung the Canadian national anthem more times than I would like to admit. Love that you wrote it into the story!
    August 4th, 2012 at 04:43am
  • hockeychick37

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    update soon!!! i love this!!!
    August 1st, 2012 at 02:56pm
  • soupy

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    Is she falling victim of his many "charms".

    It will be interesting how jess reacts when she sobers up
    July 27th, 2012 at 11:24pm
  • Ladyfiaran

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    I LOL'ed at the last line, I love how feisty Jessica is Mr. Green
    July 27th, 2012 at 09:25pm
  • C-u-on-the-Flipside

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    I feel like things are about to get veerryyy interesting once they reach her house. Can't wait for the next update!
    July 23rd, 2012 at 01:44am
  • Emily Lane

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    Awww, Crosby why'd you have to make her cry? That was low, Sid. The poor girl was drunk, take it easy.
    July 21st, 2012 at 06:46am
  • RebaXBroda

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    I like the tension between them:) Can't wait for an update!
    July 20th, 2012 at 11:38pm
  • Crosby'sBabyGirl

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    I really like this, can't wait for more.
    July 20th, 2012 at 09:48pm