Why does she constantly put herself through this torture?! LEAVE HIM!!! I've read quite a few abusive boyfriend stories where all the men are just awful, but he takes the cake. Letting other people harrasss and sexually assult his girl is just plain horrible. I saw a few spelling/grammar mistakes in this, but I figured out what you were trying to say. I'm glad you updated though!
I love it....you had me wanting more from the first chapter....excited to see what happens next. Hope you update soon, it's an amazing story.....please keep going :)
@ January Rose I actually just did an update the other day on the avengedsevenfoldfanfictio .com and I forgot to put it on here! Will be doing so asap!! Thank you so much for the comment, I'm glad you're enjoying it!!
This is an AMAZING start to this story! Your story is super descriptive and has lots of emotion. I feel like crying when Timothy talks to Laura or about Laura. He lowers her self esteem so much, it's sad. I only hope she can one day be free of him, it's pretty obvious he is only using her. Please, if you are still in Mibba regularly, update this fantastic story. I need to know if she ever gets away.
@ TARDISblue Thank you so much for reading and leaving me a comment I really appreciate it I plan on hopefully having more time to post :) thanks again!
Amazing writing, really descriptive and I cannot wait to see more of this. Some A7X stories just jump straight into the character-band member meeting but this is rather unique and left me reeling!
@ ayeekristi Thank you for the comment I am gla you enjoyed it. As of right now it is looking like I wi be having an update out by no later than the 10th! I have five more chapters already written for this story, I just have to post them. :)
I am amazed at the amount going on in this chapter alone! So much emotion and information summed up in one page. Its not too much to take in though, and i think that's really difficult to manage. You had the perfect amount of detail. The chapter made me cringe, but because of the events - the writing was amazing (as if i haven't used 'amazing' enough times already). I'm curious to see where this could go!