Don't Tell, I Beg. - Comments

  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    So I came across this story in comment swap and I'm really glad that I did. I see that you posted it forever ago, and I'm more than guilty of the same thing! I honestly probably wouldn't have ever read a story like this if it wasn't for the swap, but I'm grateful that I did!

    I feel so bad for poor Parker. He's literally been through Hell and back. It must be so tough to struggle with his fears, especially now that he has a new family. I'm glad that Noah is befriending him and being protective of him.

    Noah seems like a genuinely good guy. I'm hoping that he doesn't have any skeletons in his closet, but he doesn't seem like he would be malicious in any way. I hope that he doesn't get too far ahead of himself and move too quickly with Parker and scare him off. I think they would make a really cute couple!

    I really enjoyed reading this story, and maybe one day you'll have inspiration to write more. Glad I came across it!
    August 11th, 2019 at 04:31am
  • TheClicheUserName

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    I think that you made two super endearing characters. Parker is the beautiful wounded bird that is trying to find its bearings and Noah is the valiant hero, swooping in to save the day and steal our hearts. I think that there is a perfect balance between mystery and information regarding Parker's dark past with his mother and brother. I think this is super.
    July 31st, 2014 at 07:24am
  • Strawberry Red

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    please update soon.... I really love this series.....
    March 5th, 2013 at 05:50pm
  • Bludgeoned.Brittany

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    I havent conmented on a story in a really long time but I thought I would this time becauae I love your stories. Ive read desirably hatrful and I thought it was absouletly amazing. I then read the sequal abd this story and I just gotta say wow you are sooo talented! Im also reading assumptions and let me tell you im in love with that story. Right now its my favorite. Sorry for such a long comment and that its on multiple stories I just want you to know im a HUGE fan of your writing!! Keep it up cause I will ve looking fer updates:D
    November 28th, 2012 at 12:16am
  • kew_atl

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    Aw poor Parker!
    November 25th, 2012 at 09:41pm
  • HowlingHale

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    you gotta update this more often :D
    i love Parker :3
    November 25th, 2012 at 06:40pm
  • rathlora

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    omgomgomgomg! you're back! i went back and read the prequals but i totally missed this story :D so happy, well except parkers going crazy. that kinda sucks for him :'( poor baby
    November 25th, 2012 at 01:44pm
  • BeccySaysRawr

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    Please update soon! I miss this story :(
    November 22nd, 2012 at 08:43am
  • Snow Horror

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    ever gonna update, love?
    November 21st, 2012 at 08:47pm
  • Snow Horror

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    Well if you read the very end of Your body is a wonderland, then you would see that Parker calls Joel. Parker is Joel's brother, and there is a chance that we will see them in this one, but you have to give it time so they can blend together... just saying. (Wow... sorry if I sounded like a twat there. Not the intent, i swear.)
    November 21st, 2012 at 08:47pm
  • Anthony1414

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    How is this a sequel to Desirably Hateful? It's completely different.. I was looking forward to more of Joel and Mitch :(
    November 11th, 2012 at 08:12am
  • iamianenep

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    hey, i read desirably hateful, i was just wondering how this is related to mitch and joel's story.?
    November 8th, 2012 at 01:09pm
  • iamianenep

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    hey, i read desirably hateful, i was just wondering how this is related to mitch and joel's story.?
    November 8th, 2012 at 01:09pm
  • miyyoww

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    Is it against the law if i put this on wattpad but i'll say this is not mine and i'll mention your name. I would be so grateful if you let me do that :3
    November 7th, 2012 at 02:31pm
  • the shield.

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    Wow. I'm so impressed by this entire story. I want to say that first of all, I am not a fan of slash stories. I'm all for same sex love, I just don't really like reading them. But, I want to say that this is written so well. I usually pick out certain lines from the story to talk about, but wow. That's all I can say. Everything written in the first two chapters was just completely flawless. I like how different Noah and Parker are. The contrast is obvious, yet not thrown at the readers faces. I recommended and subscribed just because I really love you're writing and I want to see how this story pans out.
    November 5th, 2012 at 01:46am
  • c u n t m u f f i n

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    First things first: BEING GAY IS OKAY! Things said otherwise tend to bug me. It was really difficult reading that part but I got through it. I actually liked getting to know the character better and you did it well. I can't wait to see where this story goes. I'm predicting that Parker will become Noah's forst client.
    October 22nd, 2012 at 06:51am
  • Snow Horror

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    ummmm you will update before I become a decomposing pile of mushroom food... right? lol
    October 15th, 2012 at 06:24am
  • Sarcastically Blunt

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    Love the trilogy. Great use of pathos and detail. Update please
    September 22nd, 2012 at 05:52am
  • Snow Horror

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    AWWWWW! are you ok?

    update soon kk?
    September 17th, 2012 at 07:50pm
  • garrett hedlund;

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    are you okay? did hurricane isaac hit you hard???
    September 7th, 2012 at 04:59am