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  • Drop_DeadM

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    you're quickly growing to be one of my favourite writers and I adore it.
    This is such a well written and thought out story, I really hope that the social workers report goes well and that we can see EJ's and Michelle's relationship blossom into something amazing.

    Update soon love.
    September 19th, 2013 at 11:24pm
  • cin

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    I love how Brian and Evander develop a close relationship super fast. He is such a cute boy, I hope there isn't any major problem that risks Evander being taken from Brian.

    I can't wait for the next update. (:
    August 17th, 2013 at 08:41am
  • AllTimeLowIsMyLife14

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    I'm in love with this story and all the characters!(: I really hope that you update soon too!
    August 8th, 2013 at 10:39am
  • caligirl1605

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    The social workers report makes me nervous! I know Michelle and evander have yet to gain comfortable footing with each other , but I hope this won't solely influence the social worker and cause her to think he would be better with his overbearing strict grandparents.
    August 6th, 2013 at 10:15pm
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    Just read this story for the first time and I absolutely love it! I'm a bit worried about the social worker's report though and I hope she writes it in Brian's favor. I hope Michelle starts to come around too. She's acting a bit childish in my opinion, she needs to grow a pair and get involved, show Evander that she cares and wants to establish a relationship with him.
    August 3rd, 2013 at 10:19pm
  • LynShiningStar

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    Great chapter! Hopefully the social worker can see how much they truly need each other.
    August 3rd, 2013 at 10:28am
  • fiction246

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    Oh my gosh!!! EJ cannot be taken away from Brian!!! Thank you for updating so quickly!!! Looking forward to more :) and I hope everything is going to be okay with Brian and Michelle. It's a bit concerning that she is away!!!
    August 3rd, 2013 at 09:50am
  • synystergirl

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    Love this story - please hurry and update again!!!
    August 3rd, 2013 at 07:12am
  • fiction246

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    I'm really scared that she is going to give bad feedback about Brian!!! I hope they don't try and send EJ away!!! Really great update!! I really love this story and Brian and EJ are so sweet together. I am hoping nothing bad happens. Looking forward to more :) the house looks cool buy the way <3
    August 2nd, 2013 at 12:56pm
  • fiction246

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    Just read the whole thing so far again...really hoping you post more soon :) I really love this story!!!
    July 5th, 2013 at 02:59pm
  • xXxMCRsavedmexXx

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    Ahh i missed this story so much! I absolutely adore it! More soon i hope... Please?
    June 14th, 2013 at 10:05pm
  • Myl

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    Story is so good love it
    Very cute chapter

    I hope you will update soon....
    Thanks
    June 14th, 2013 at 05:35pm
  • fiction246

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    Really sweet chapter. Poor EJ :( I love his moments with Brian they are really cute!! Can't wait for more :)
    June 14th, 2013 at 12:58pm
  • No Tomorrow

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    ah I love this!
    Evander is so adorable :)
    Can't wait to see what happens next!
    June 14th, 2013 at 11:11am
  • LynShiningStar

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    Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
    April 2nd, 2013 at 01:21am
  • fiction246

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    Aww poor little EJ!!!! And the teacher thinking that Matt and Brian were a couple :P I love it!!! Can't wait for more :)
    April 1st, 2013 at 10:16pm
  • MermaidSlur

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    Aww this was such a cute chapter!!! I'm so glad this was updated!
    April 1st, 2013 at 09:52pm
  • delirium.

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    This is a really interesting story. lol Short shit. Sorry the immaturity in my just broke free. Hmm, 19 chapters, yeah I'm going to sub and rec this so I can come back to it. This is amazing, you are amazing, I just don't even know what to say.
    March 30th, 2013 at 12:41am
  • K.Monroe

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    OMG! I love this story I must admit I'm guilty of being a silent reader as I've been following this story from the beginning, but I can never seem to get the words together to comment on this lovely piece. But I now have to unleash my addiction to this story.

    I absolutely love how EJ and Brian interact. Brian is an amazing father to him despite never truly having a chance to be in his life until after his mother's death. Evander is so adorable as he clings to Brian. I thought in the beginning it was going to be difficult for the two of them, but they keep amazing me. I just hope EJ gives Michelle a chance and I also hope the Michelle tries to be in his life.

    Evander's grandparents are trying too hard to me. True, they've lost their daughter, but EJ lost his mother. He never knew them and though he's still new to Brian. He knows that he cares for him. Okay I think I've done enough commenting/rambling for one comment. I just love this story!
    February 27th, 2013 at 11:48pm
  • ItWasn'tMe

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    Awww! This really cute <3
    February 27th, 2013 at 03:22pm