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  • nihilist.cryptid

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    I really liked this chapter, and it was good to see Evander acting like a little kid rather than the quiet precious thing you've depicted him to be, though it didn't make the little guy any less precious and just asdfghjkl; he's too precious for this world. Update soon please! c:
    February 22nd, 2013 at 01:35am
  • xXxMCRsavedmexXx

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    Another great and well written story of yours that has caught my interest. :) Can't wait for more!
    February 20th, 2013 at 07:15am
  • fiction246

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    Yay update :) feel a little bad for Michelle :( can't wait for EJ to go to school!!!! Such a cutie :) can't wait for more!!!!
    February 20th, 2013 at 07:08am
  • MermaidSlur

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    Aww I can't wait for him to start school! Maybe you could do some updates in his point of view, just a suggestion :D
    February 20th, 2013 at 05:41am
  • nihilist.cryptid

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    The last chapter was so amazing! Update soon please c':
    February 19th, 2013 at 03:03am
  • Jimmy.Sullivan

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    I just started reading this and I cried so hard when reading the last chapter, in fact I'm still crying now because I miss him so much. This is amazing and I love how much EJ cares for the man he was never able to meet.
    February 11th, 2013 at 04:05am
  • pekigirl

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    you made me cry on Jimmy's part. but it was beautiful and I loved the chapter
    February 10th, 2013 at 10:04am
  • RandaRue22

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    i can't believe its been so long on him passing already. It seems like just yesterday that I found out about it.... this was a great update.
    February 10th, 2013 at 05:57am
  • fiction246

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    Beautiful chapter :) EJ is such a sweetie. I am glad he wants to stay with Brian. The whole part about Jimmy was really beautiful!!! <3 can't wait for more!!!
    February 10th, 2013 at 03:07am
  • pekigirl

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    awwww this story is so adorable =) I read it all today and I'm in love. I can't wait for the next chapter
    February 1st, 2013 at 12:16am
  • DreamingCorpse

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    I love this story! It's so cute, and ugh, the grandparents though.. I could just kill them ._.
    January 31st, 2013 at 06:34pm
  • fiction246

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    Brian and EJ are so sweet together. I'm worried about Michelle...is she going to leave?!? I hope not!!!
    January 30th, 2013 at 11:37pm
  • ZombieToast

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    I like the avenged sevenfold site because its just what you're looking for. I can't wait for more :)
    January 1st, 2013 at 08:26pm
  • caligirl1605

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    Loge this story. And about the avenged sevenfold website I like it because if that is what you want to
    Read it is in one place either way I use both sites
    December 11th, 2012 at 01:15am
  • mandapoop

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    i NEED an update holy crap. i love this so much omg fjdsklfjsdlk
    October 27th, 2012 at 07:37am
  • mcra7x

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    I need an update I love it
    October 27th, 2012 at 05:40am
  • SynysterKitty113

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    IDK, I think it's great to be able to find their stories easier but who wants to repost their stories somewhere else? I agree with you but alas I will give it a chance and see how the site works for a while. Great chapter by the way.
    October 24th, 2012 at 08:32pm
  • Lexi Wombat

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    This story is so fantastic, I love Brian as a dad (:
    October 23rd, 2012 at 08:48pm
  • fiction246

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    cant wait for more, loving it so far :)
    October 23rd, 2012 at 06:00am
  • xXLostXSoulXLoverXx

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    I feel so bad for EJ :'( Can't wait for more :)
    October 22nd, 2012 at 04:16am
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