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  • fiction246

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    So glad he has finally been reunited with Brian!! Looking forward to seeing what happens next :)
    June 13th, 2015 at 12:19pm
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    Loved it as always! EJ is so cute with Brian, I'm sure he'll have a blast on his birthday, but poor guy will be heartbroken when it's time to leave. Can't wait for more!
    June 10th, 2015 at 02:21pm
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    Caught up again :P I'm glad Michelle is sticking up for EJ against his grandparents. But at least his grandmother is coming to his senses :) looking forward to them all being reunited!!!
    May 30th, 2015 at 10:18am
  • EmilieAlyosha

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    That was a sweet chapter. Even I'm excited for them.
    May 28th, 2015 at 05:20pm
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    Reading this story and I love it.

    Although, quick question, is he going to the Disney theme park in California or Florida? Because the one in California is Disneyland and the one in Florida is Walt Disney World. Just my obnoxious pointing that out as a former Disney employee.
    May 28th, 2015 at 01:29am
  • K.Monroe

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    Michelle just went all Mama Bear protecting her cub. I wish that James could see that she and Brian just love EJ and want what's best for him. He's never know his father, but he's never known them either. How can James just assume that living in Oklahoma with them is what's best for him? Plus, (correct me if I'm wrong) I thought the original BC had Brian's name on it still? That was how he was able to gain custody of his son in the first place and then there was one where he relinquished his rights. IDK, I may have to re-read 37 chapters, but they are 37 amazing chapters!!!
    May 28th, 2015 at 12:30am
  • EmilieAlyosha

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    finally one of them submits. The grandfather will be a tough nut to crack but atleast Holly is breaking. That was a low blow birthday gift though. Thanks for the double update.
    May 27th, 2015 at 11:35pm
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    May 27th, 2015 at 05:12pm
  • EmilieAlyosha

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    Way to go Michelle for keeping her ground. The Kents are really overstepping their boundaries. The picture below is adorable. It's kinda how I pictured him as well. Thanks for the update.
    May 27th, 2015 at 05:10pm
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    Yay! I was so excited when I saw you updated again! I'm so glad that Michelle is jumping in and really starting to fight for him. The Kents are jerks for constantly bringing up EJs biological mom all of the time and it's not fair to keep putting him through it. Loved it, can't wait for more!
    May 27th, 2015 at 01:16pm
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    Just caught up lol love three updates in a row :) I'm glad that EJ is getting closer to Michelle!! It's nice that he is starting to accept her more :) I hope the Kents don't cause trouble by having a house in California!!! Why do they have to be so close!!! Can't wait to see what happens next :)
    May 26th, 2015 at 01:17pm
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    This is such a great story and I love seeing updates!! I love that you made Michelle so nice in this and I hope the Kent's don't try and pull anything while Bryan is away. Looking forward to the next update!!
    May 26th, 2015 at 02:27am
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    May 25th, 2015 at 08:03pm
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    oh you're so the best with the updates!!!!
    and the story is getting better and better!
    I hope another update i coming soon i can't stop reading it its so cute how michelle is becoming a mom and EJ is accepting her.

    wondering how the lunch will turn out
    who knows she can show the Kents another side of Haners
    May 25th, 2015 at 08:01pm
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    I love that ej and michelle are still bonding, i just really hope that the kents dont do anything stupid.
    May 25th, 2015 at 02:10pm
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    i LOVE the updates I've been waiting so long but i'm glad you updates i love this story and i feel bad for Ej i happy to see that he ad Michelle are getting closer. i cant wait ti see how his grandparents act around Michelle.. i cant wait for the next update.Thumb up
    May 25th, 2015 at 01:52am
  • EmilieAlyosha

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    Okay I seriously squealed when I saw the update. I knew the grandparents were going to keep fighting. I admit I feel for them. Losing your daughter and then losing your grandson (in a way) is a double stab. It's good that Michelle and EJ are growing closer. And no these are not shitty chapters. They show progress.
    May 25th, 2015 at 01:27am
  • EmilieAlyosha

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    I'm glad EJ and Michelle have started to really bond. I'm curious how they will get along for the next few months. I'm glad to see she's dedicated to it.

    Has social services closed their case with Brian? I know the grandparents are still fighting tooth and nail, but I'm not sure if it was mentioned where social services were. I'm sorry if I'm reading too much into this. Social services, custody disputes are kinda my area of concentration so my mind moves far beyond the basics. I thought they were involved because Brian had signed over his rights and they were looking to reestablish custody. So I was wondering if all of that had been resolved. It was the basis behind my comment before. Two times a month him missing school adds up and they tend to be critical of everything on active cases. Again, I'm sorry if I'm reading too much into this.

    Thanks so much for the multiple updates. It was such a good surprise. Also, congratulations on the 200+
    May 24th, 2015 at 07:54pm
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    I'm so glad that EJ and Michelle have started to bond, I hope he continues to let her in because she genuinely only wants what's best for him and for him to approve of her. Looking forward to more!
    May 24th, 2015 at 02:18pm
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    I love this story soo soo much! It's heartbreaking to see EJ have to say goodbye, and I'm curious to see how Brian holds up with all of it too! Can't wait for another update. Awesome story!
    May 24th, 2015 at 06:07am