Chocolate Eyes - Comments

Great chapter!! I hope EJ doesn't get too upset when Brian has to go. I don't want his grandparents to have any more ammunition so they can take him away. Looking forward to seeing what happens next :)

Yikes. Missing school two times a month while social services are on one corner and bitter grandparents on another? That might not have been the best idea Brian.

I'm so glad this updated. I've missed this story.

Sorry for all the comments but they wouldn't post and then all of a sudden they all posted!!

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I'm soooooooo happy to see this update. I love this story and can't wait to read more. Thank you so much!!!

I am sooooo happy to see this update. I've really missed this story and can't wait to read more. Thanks so much!!

I am sooooooooooooo happy to see this update!!! I really love this story and have missed it. Thank you so much and I look forward to reading more!!!!

I really wish you you write a sequel no matter how small. I don't want it to end like this. Great story

Please write an update :) Thank you in advance

Please write an update :)

So I started this story and in chapter 2 it gets very descriptive about everything and everyone but Zaky. You describe everyone but him!! Why???

So I was reading this with the assumption that it was finished and I was slightly upset when I got to the end of chapter 31 and there was no 'next chapter' button

Anyway, I love this story! It flows so well. I really like the way you write Brian and especially Evander, he's so cute. I'm not too fond of Holly and James, though? Can't they see that Brian is giving his son a good life? They need to give it a rest! And I'm super curious to know more about Claudia! I'm with Brian, she definitely has secrets.

Anywayyyy...you should update soon

Ignore.

Normally I'm not into stories like this. I really don't even know what made me give it a chance at all. But I actually rather enjoyed this one. Please update as soon as you can.

I haven't been on here for some time but I'm so glad I checked in and saw all the updates on this story!!! Please keep updating when you can - love it!!!

Love the second update :) I have a feeling Holly and Brian kind of understand each other.. at certain points.. but still Holly has a difficult time of letting go the fact Brian is the father and is the best option. and that James is the one with all the evil opinions.

I hope EJ and Michelle will eventually get along
and looking forward for another updates

Why didn't Brian leave for the remainder of the play date?

I wonder why Claudia moved so close to Brian? An hour away from Brian but states away from her parents? When Brian's touring comes up things are going to hit the ceiling fan.

Thanks for the fast update. I was surprised to see it so soon.

I'm surprised holly even agreed to let them go. Brian just needs to leave there right now and take EJ home!!! Those Kents are toxic!!! Can't wait to see what happens next :) I was so excited to see it was updated again so quickly!!!!!

Love it the Kents are so closed minded its crazy. Can't wait to read more.

Erg Brian just needs to take EJ home. James is just so mean to Brian :( looking forward to more!! I really love this story!!!!!!

The Kent's really bother me I don't know why but they do or maybe it cause part if my family is like them. It's ugly but anywho I'm so happy you updated, I love the update by the way and I can't wait to see what happens next.