Temporary Bliss - Comments

@ teenagedream91
A small Freddie Page short story, maybe just 2 chapters but I had a smutty idea, and some new Tom stories hihi I have to start planning something for when I finish Robert's story.

@ BlueDreams
Oooo whatcha working on? Anything I can read hehe

@ teenagedream91
Alright, I still need to read it. I eventually will, I'm just working on some things at the moment eheh

@ BlueDreams
Thank you
My other Ryan story is now up, completely different and is more my style haha

@ teenagedream91
It was a good twist in the end. Great work darling!

@ BlueDreams
Yep haha I started to type it up and it ended with them fighting and I realized I had to wrap it up that chapter haha so I had my own spin and since ruby lives in the US and has the same personality as Ryan it would fit and Dorien starts a relationship with Alana haha :) glad you like it

As I expected, Ryan completely ditched the relationship idea and I know that deep down Dorien knew that she was in for a heartbreak.
But WHAT? Ryan is dating Dorien's sister? And then Dorien is apparently in love with Alana? Oh this is such a good ending!! I love it!

@ BlueDreams
Spot on

@ teenagedream91
So Ruby and Nat are opposites and Dorien are in the middle.

@ BlueDreams
Yeah she was and someone had to be, so she was able to have her eyes open for the most part.
Pretty much, Ruby doesn't judge because she doesn't take life seriously and sleeps around and Nat is a lot more strict.

@ teenagedream91
Well, Alana was pretty much a revelation.
I know so Ruby's judgement is much, much lighter than Nat's.

@ BlueDreams
I changed my idea and having Alana being in the story more than just one time and yes Ruby is back! She is def different than your typical sister haha Ruby can be protective, but she sees Dorien branching out and doesn't really know the situation as well as Nat so she's just bias about it.

P.S: You're welcome for the comment sweetie <3

P.S: You're welcome for the comment sweetie <3

I'm shocked with Alana's speech. She doesn't seem to be so bad but Dorien will always be uncomfortable with her because she did things she didn't want to.
Ruby's back! And definitely not with the speech that I expected ahah Nat acted more like a sister than Ruby, actually.
Cliffhanger! Ah, I'm actually not very positive about Ryan's reply but maybe I'm wrong.

@ BlueDreams
Haha it's the highest form of flattery

@ teenagedream91
Yes because offering food IS THE MOST ROMANTIC gesture ever xD

@ BlueDreams
It is romantic like that stupid romantic lol Ryan just has a way with words doesn't he? Not only that but he offered her food, remember? XD

@ BlueDreams
It is romantic like that stupid romantic lol Ryan just has a way with words doesn't he?

@ teenagedream91
UAU He remembers her name. How romantic. Dear Lord xD