Temporary Bliss - Comments

@ BlueDreams
Right? lol he is just so adorable and down right sweet to her. Well Dorien did tell him a few things about herself when he sat down with her and Natalia, if he remembers? He remembers her name haha

@ teenagedream91
Oh isn't he just a sweetie pie? I bet that he knows nothing about her.

@ BlueDreams
No haha he associates Dorien with sex since their official meeting they had sex and keep doing it so he thinks it's okay to cut the chit chat and just do it

@ teenagedream91
He doesn't seem like a talker, though.

@ BlueDreams
You're right it mostly comes through their sexy time because that's all they have done so far. There hasn't been that much talking other than when Ryan sat down with her and then when she got drunk. That was pretty much it lol

@ BlueDreams
The endings are always different, definitely.

Exactly, her happiness is temporary and it comes mostly during their sexy time, in my opinion.

@ BlueDreams
You can still make stories interesting with the same happy plots they just have different endings. Dorien will have some happy moments, she actually does just it's one sided at the moment. She cherishes her moments with him I mean just the title alone should tell you enough. Dorien has temporary happiness

@ teenagedream91
Yes but personally, I find it hard not to give happiness through a story. I'm hopeless ahah and I hope that people don't get sick of me because of my preferences for happiness and sweet plots.

It's alright :)

@ BlueDreams
There has to be. When there is just always happiness in a story you know that every story you read by that author they are going to have a happy ending.

Sorry about that lol

@ teenagedream91
Basically that. I'm always fair but I know that stories aren't just about happiness. There has to be drama, twists, sadness, departure, broken hearts. Honestly, I don't really care if they stay together, I just want Dorien to open her eyes or she'll always be a prey for guys like Ryan.

That's why I couldn't find it! xD Oh alright, sounds good :D

@ BlueDreams
I get you. You just want the character to be happy and make sure that thu get what they deserve. Whether or not Dorien and Ryan will be together is undetermined on your side but I already figured it out how to end it hehe I hate people like that. They bend over backwards for someone who completely disreyards them so I decided to make a story like that :)

It's not out yet haha I do have the summary link in a chapter for this story I think. After I finish this story I will post the first chapter on my new Ryan story

@ teenagedream91
I know that it happens but it just makes me slightly upset, you know? Maybe it's my temper but I have a hard time accepting the fact that some people think that they need to be please to be accepted.

You have another Ryan story? I think I never read, I shall!

@ BlueDreams
Sometimes a person needs to experience it themselves in order to learn their lesson and some don't even learn after that. They just keep going in that vicious cycle of pleasing that person regardless if they are comfortable.

Ryan can easily be perceived as a dick in a story. Thats why I have so much fun lol my other lochte story in the works is a lot more sentimental than this one that's for sure

@ teenagedream91
I understand that she might feel the need to please him but she should give herself more credit.
Well I was trying but I seriously can't like him xD It might be short but I know you're right, I sense that a lot is going to happen.

@ BlueDreams
I see now.

Dorien does what almost every girl does, tries to please the first man that gives her attention. In her mind this is not only an older man but Ryan lochte. How did she ever get so lucky? Dorian is really going on a limb to please Ryan even by doing a threesome. I wanted this to be different, a story about pressure and whether or not she is going to overcome is all up to her.
You don't have to like Ryan lol I don't like Ryan at the moment but it's all for the story :) this is going to be a crazy ride despite it being short.

I meant that her role was a bit ungrateful because she just wanted to help Dorien and ended up looking like the bad guy.
She bought lingerie just for him? I'm really trying not to jump to conclusions but I'm starting to view Ryan as a jerk who makes Dorien feel insecure. She has this idiotic need to please him and that pisses me off a bit. I hate when anyone does that, I really do.
I felt so awkward while reading the part when Dorien reveals the lingerie to Ryan.. I mean, it's not her at all. And then suddenly there's ANOTHER girl around? I was NOT expecting that. Oh and Ryan thinks he's so smart... I'm really trying to hold myself from considering him a jerk.
Me no gusta denial train :S

Oh gosh drunken conversations about sex must be hilarious and embarrassing. And well, Nat's role was a bit ungrateful here. She was just doing the right thing and she had to take up on drunk Dorien.
I have to say that I loved Ruby, Dorien is going to be teased either way by everyone. Poor girl.
I hate feeling that Ryan uses Dorien and she's aware and lets him. She deserves better, that's all. Besides, he's pretty rough with her and insensitive.
Glorious smut once again!

Oh, Ryan. Sigh. And oh, Dorien! She seems like a sweet girl. I like it.

I have to say, though, that hands down this is the best Ryan Lochte story on here. You seem to have a grasp on the English language, and have the ability to tell a story. I'm excited for this story! LOL. Like Raffie16 said below me, I'm expecting a lot of dirty, guilty, smutty sex, though.

Good job! :)

I feel bad for Dorien, it must be horrible to have everyone talking about you. I mean, it must be really uncomfortable.
Worse then that, she lost her virginity to Ryan... I mean, it was an important part of herself.
I'm glad she has Nat, though. She seems to be a really good friend. But ah those other teammates -.-' God, I had when people turn so nosy that they are almost rude.
But ahhhh Nat's meeting with Ryan, oh for the love hahah Dorien you better brace yourself girl.

I like it :)