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AWH.
now that.
that is so cute.
Ross is so ajskdjfhalskdjcawe.
please update soonL!

This is exactly what I was talking about in my last comment! I love the fact that something so simple--like a kiss on the lips--can make someone feel so much better.

Can't wait until your next update!

THAT WAS SO CUTE! I love Ross ugh <3

that is so sad :c
that short chapter just
it made me so emotional omg
"Nothing's the same, no matter how hard we try."
cue the waterworks
PLEASE UPDATE SOON

Gah, this is just so brilliant. The fact that he's dying, and she's so unhappy, just kills me. I wish she could just suck it up and try to be happy before he's gone! I know it might be hard, but since he's dying, she should try to let things go. At least until he pops his clogs!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm having the same reaction as grace violet blood. :(
I really really love Ross and I'm sooooo sad that hes dying. This story breaks my heart. Update soon!

I CAN'T
he's dying
and she's distant
and there are just tears EVERYWHERE.
sigh.

UPDATE
YOU UPDATED OH GOD
READING NOW
EXCUSE MY SQUEALS OF EXCITEMENT

wow, I absolutely am in love with this story. Its so unlike anything else I've ever read. Its emotional, heartbreaking, and beautiful. I can't wait for more.

Aww, it's really sad that their relationship isn't what it used to be. :(

Aww, it's really sad that their relationship isn't what it used to be. :(

aw I agree with Alex
This chapter made me sad.
Update sooon! :)

oh, how nostalgic :c
THIS CHAPTER MADE ME SAD.
please update soon!

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL. I love it. It's so real, it's like, no doubt about it, Lydia and Ross do exist and this is their story. It's so wonderful. c:

I REALLY DON'T LIKE LYDIA
SHE IS SO SELFISH.
I mean, it's understandable to be selfish because come on, we're all human here. well, technically, Lydia is made up of words and adjectives and selfish traits and stuff but still. STILL. THAT DOESN'T GIVE HER THE RIGHT TO JUST AKSDJFHLKAJSDHCLKAJSDF.
I still can't get over it.
I'm sorry I'm an over emotional wreck.
please update soon (:

Wow, another two astounding chapters. I love how easily you can tell a story in such short doses and still leave me clinging on for more. I'm interested to see if Lydia goes or not.

And no need to thank me, this was beautiful and someone was bound to write a review eventually!

Geez, I want to know what kind of cancer he has. I assume it has something to do with the liver, since he was jaundiced?

That's what I love about this, though; the spontaneity of it all, and the mystery. You never know what's going to happen next, and you leave out so much detail that it's mind boggling. I think it's fabulous!

I was reading some of these comments and someone said that they didn't like the disconnectedness of the chapters, but I honestly love it. It's like flash fiction and I think that's the point you're going towards, especially from the last chapter to this one. This is a wonderful story and you deserved that nice review :)

All I can say is this is GOLDEN! :D

This is amazing, you're an amazing writer! I can't wait for more:)