September 4th, 2012 at 03:55pm
Wow. This is...amazing. I came here from the Mibba mag which is really strange because I usually don't enjoy the stories recommended there...but wow. This is absolutely fantastic. The short chapters are beautiful as well as the simplicity of each one. I love how you can give readers chills just by putting a simple sentence somewhere we wouldn't expect it. And how this story is taking a turn. Usually the woman leaves when the husband cheats on her but then he gets a disease or something and she goes back...but here it started with her taking him back. Something I'm completely not used to. So I'm already thrown for a loop, and if anyone knows anything about me, it's that I really love being thrown for loops. I hate predictability which is why I'm so frustrated at my own stories and writing style because I can never seem to accomplish unpredictability, heh heh.
Anyway, I guess I'll let you know this is the first story I've subscribed to in probably a year and the first one that's not one of mine or my friend's that I've ever recommended. Congratulations - this is really a work of art. <3
i'm sorry :c </3