Fin - Comments

oh gosh this is so beautiful.

You have a way with words, honestly. I feel like I'm watching the end of Marley and Me and I just want to cry my little eyes out.

OH MY GOD
THAT ENDING MAKES ME WANT TO CRY
because shit's gonna go down
shit's gonna go down.

This story is precious. I like how you're telling the story of Ross and Lydia which seems to be a loveless marriage rather than her finding a new love after her husband cheated. It's cool that you at least start with that rather than delve into something new, if you get what I mean. ANYWHO. Love it. :)

Ross and Lydia! That's so cute. I think that age difference is cute. I like that their relationship wasn't this fantastic, amazing experience. It was just a normal relationship. Update soon! :)

JSL;DKFJA;SDKLCALWKHDEFJKH YOU ARE KLLING ME.
seriously.
what even, I can't.
you really have a way with words, this story is gorgeous c:
please update soon!

I totally agree with Pelican Park. The fact that the main characters keep you wondering what their names are. It's mysterious. You can tell the girl is detaching herself from the guy for what he did which was wrong.

Okay, I really love that they're nameless. Like it's just 'she' and 'he'. I don't know why I like that so much. But I do like this story. I like the guy, despite what he did. I feel like this is going to be a rather sad story, but I can help but like it. Update soon :)

I love this! Just a few paragraphs and there is a whole lot of emotions in there! I look forward to the next update!

That was amazing, I love it. Please update soon, this is incredible and it's just the first chapter I can't even imagine how awesome the rest of the story is going to be :3

Oh wow. I wonder what's going to happen. It's only one chapter and I love it already. Update soon :)

You create stories that never cease to amaze me. Honestly I'm excited to read this like I wonder what their back story is. I love it! (: