Would You Bargain With Hell? - Comments

Oh my gosh, I hope she gets out all right, but there's this feeling at the back of my mind she won't.

@ Rockett
Great, I'm glad I could hel :).

@ fearless-forever
I'm really glad you like it :) No, i wouldn't have the heart to kill them off. At least not anytime soon.
I've done comment swap, but i never get comments back. It's awful.
I like your idea about changing the title...i might do that.

First of all I am completely in love with this story and would never stop reading it unless you did something really stupid like oh, I dunno, killed off rayder or mason or brought in some girl for mason to mess around with. So yeah, as I have deduced that you are too smart to do something like that, I have decided I will never stop reading this story until it is finiahed and then maybe check out some of your other ones.

And in response to your queation, I really have no idea honestly abput how to get more readers. There is the comment swap thing, which can sometimes get more readers and subscribers but not always. I bet that if more people would just take the time to click on this story they would fall in love with it. How I discovered this story was honestly by chance. I didn't really want to click on the title because it seemed so long (though in retrospect I'm glad I did) . Maybe if you changed the title it would get more people interested.
Maybe you could do something like, "If I Make it to Heaven..." or "Would You Bargain With Hell? ". And then you could put the whole quote in the summary. Because I love the quote I think it's just to long for the title. :)

@ fearless-forever
Thank you for your input :) Do you happen to know any ways to get more people to read your stories? I'd love to get more readers and i have no ideas

I really liked the new chapter and I have nothing against longer hcapters, it just means I get to read more XD. Looking forward to more :)

Well I don't want to be one of those people that's always like telling you to update but once a week would be nice, although by no means would I be unhappy if you updated more frequently. And I agree with cucake violence about the english stuff. I also think that the story should only be as long as your original plot idea takes. I hate it when people try to make it longer and it just gets all messed up.
Well tata for now, excited to see what happens nextt

ummmmmmmm i just love updates so at least once a week but more if you can manage? and honestly english is english even if we have different ways of saying stuff xD i just can't wait for an update xD

@ Cupcake Violence
:)

Mason Is like a knight in shinning armor, her knight :P its sooooo CUTE! :) Oh noes I hope shes okaies

@ fearless-forever
Thanks :3 I'm really glad you like it :)

Oh my gosh I love this story so much and mason is so sweet!!!

@ Cupcake Violence
Haha :) YAY

you want my thoughts.. does that include squealing like a little fan girl and doing a happy dance cause shes gonna sneak out to see Mason? If not well than I loved it :) I love love LOVE Mason :)

@ Cupcake Violence
Haha :)

@ ToTheMoon
Thanks :)

Ewww he's slimy I don't like him seriously pair him with like the evil twin or something make the twin want him cause Rayder has him xD serve them well it would :P

I like the newest update ^_^

@ Cupcake Violence
It will certainely be considered :) Haha. I'm glad you responded that way. I wasn't sure how people would respond to Patrick.

can we maybe arrange for Mason to swoop in smash Patrick on the head steal Rayder and the two of them can run away and live on the streets until Rayder's father dies and leaves her a giant amount of money that he inherited throughout his life and Rayder and Mason can live happily ever after together? can we do that?