Would You Bargain With Hell? - Comments

@ Isadora Pierce
Thanks :)

You've got really nice description, I like that. I only read chapters one and two, and from what I can gather, her mother's pretty rude. Either that or they've got a weird relationship where it's totally okay for the mother to call her kid a twat...haha.

Keep up the good work.

@ Cupcake Violence
:) Thanks

Well lots of comments congrats :) lol I love Rayder and Mason together :) and lol her sister is a biiiiiiitch xD can't wait to see what happens

@ smexycarson
Aww thank you :) I'm really glad you like it. I should have another update sometime today. <3 thanks :)

I was actually going to read this today because it intrigued me! I was glad to see comment swap bring me here. I'm on my phone and tired so reading is hard but I really enjoyed the bit that I got to read. Your writing style is great and everything flowed nicely! I hope you update soon <3 your template is also really beautiful and it was very easy to read and understand. I'm definitely going to go back and try to finish reading!!

@ genotype.
Thank you :) I'm glad you like it.

First of all, I love your descriptions. They really set the mood of the story. Your layout is lovely, too.

I love the way you showed how her new lifestyle had affected her: I felt like I had slowly been withering away.

I feel bad for Rayder; it'd be a real struggle adjusting to a new family, especially one that was constantly in the spotlight. Suddenly having to adapt to that kind of lifestyle would impossible for me, I think. Rayder handles it well, but I like that you included how she felt on the inside. It's almost like she's two different people: the person her parents want her to be, and the person she really is.

@ Cupcake Violence
Ahaha, who? Celine and Josh?

Oh yes please let them be friends :)
i love how quick you are at updating :)

@ ToTheMoon
Thanks :3 I'd like to check it out. I'm sure it's not so bad :)

@ Rockett
^_^ it would be hard not to. Its well written. Im not very good at writeing. i just started my first story three days ago.

@ ToTheMoon
Thank you :) I'm glad you do :3

Like it ^.^

@ Cupcake Violence
Yay, you have no idea how much i overthink the characters. I think i pretty much know where i'm going with it, but of course im not sure if everyone will really take to it. I tried to make a layout once...it just didnt end well haha

I actually really like their interactions :) and im not bad at making layouts i could give you a hand but there actually really simple it just comes down to finding a picture you really think represents the story :P

@ ImJustLaya
Thank you! I like when people comment, it gets me more excited to keep writing. I'm really glad you like it :)

Yes, I'm a silent reader... I'm planning on changing that :)
I like this a lot! I will be reading!

@ Cupcake Violence
I know i did too, i'm awful at making layouts so i just click random ones in the public section and i can't seem to find the old one :0 I need to find someone to make one for me -_-.

Hmmm I think i liked the previous layout better :P I like Mason so far he seems cool :)